Please correct my sentences! hello teachers! im korean toefl studant. i write short sentences. please correct them which below. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I will explain someone who has had a positive impact on my life is oda eiichiro, who is a famous comic artist on earth, with his comic ; ONEPIECE. There are several reasons why I choose him. Firstly, when I was a child, I could get ride a Ferris wheel, kind of amusement park ride, because his comic made me a brave-heart-child. Secondly, I was gotten a huge impression and pleasure in character of his comic. I will explain the qualities that make a good leader is humor. There are several reasons of why I choose that. Firstly, when I was a child, I could get ride a Ferris wheel, kind of amusement park ride. Because of leader of My group pass me a piece of joke. make me feel comfortable.