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Dear teachers and friends:

It's my honor to be here to make a speech about"Do schools kill students creativity".To the question,my answer is Yes.

Picasso once said:all children are born artists.Children are considered to be more creative and curious than adults. They find interest in growing silkworms and can play with ants for a whole day. No adults would do this.But think of this :every adult was born a child. However,as they grow older,their creativity diminishes and then completely disappeares. How can this happen?

Throughout the world,every education system in the world has the same hierarchy of subjects. Math and language are the most important with humanities,and the arts at the bottom.And no teacher teaches dance every day the way they teach math.Children are trained to solve math problems every day instead of dance.So week in and week out,from dawn to dust, children's minds become more and more lazy.They don't play with ants anymore.Finally,they are shaped into machines for homework.

Nowadays with the rapid development of the information technology, more and more people are paying attention to the importance of creativity .Schools are expected to improve the operation skills of students.Therefore,we must change the education system.We must not prevent children from dancing just because we think it's no use for getting a job.We must not prevent them from singing just because we think she or he can't be a singer.Remember:The goal of education is not to train more college professors but let children enjoy the beauty of life.

Take action now, as it isn't too late.

That's all.