Makeup Fictional Story #1

*Your correction is always welcome.
I have made a fictional story for practicing my English grammar and writing. The story, grammar, uncommon expressions, and wrong usage of words can be corrected by you. In At this time, I tried to use the phrasal verbs of 'pass' as accurately as I could. Please let help me to improve my English skill by giving me some advice. Then it starts. From the beginning:


Avon loves to work. He works at a bank and is well known for as a hard-worker. The upcoming quater quarter is very important for him, because it could be the a chance for him to get promoted. He has a bad memory that of when he has was passed up for a great opportunity up to be a regional manager. It has already been almost 5 years since he missed out.

It is really not easy to be promoted due to the bad employees that covet someone else's acheivement achievement. Among them, Peter is the worst guy whom everybody hates but has to pass on the core ideas to. That's why he could be a team leader and every employees has been having a hard time.

It is hilarious to say watch how silly he is. He can't practically do anything by himself. He is so fatuous asinine that he doesn't even know how to execute the software program which has been used for over 10 years in this company. How could he survive? That's a mysteriously unsolved thing It's an unsolved mystery. Maybe there will be nothing to pass down when he retires or is fired. He would will probably not leave be here forever.

To be continued...

A bad story about italki

I was writing in my notebook. When I opened a new tab to search for a word and then returned to italki all my sentences were gone. I wrote a lot about my native country, Korea, but it was all lost. So I don't want to search for the words and write it all over again. I don't know why this went wrong.