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    我最喜欢的养过的宠物

    我很喜欢老鼠的性格。它们很安静。以前我养过一只白色的老鼠。它是母的。它的眼睛是红色的。我买了它。
    有一天我去宠物店看看,然后我在看老鼠,宠物店店员问我想不想一直老鼠。免费的老师养一只免费的老鼠?我问他:“为什么不用付钱?”  他说:“因为这只老鼠不可以跟别老鼠在一起。有人买了这只老鼠给他的蛇吃。但是因为老鼠很大,蛇不吃她。然后顾客返回这只老鼠。”我觉得很可怜的老鼠老鼠很可怜!!!我当然带它跟我回家。
    我很喜欢她。她是我第一只养过的老鼠。我以前养过仓鼠。一只是母的,另外是公的。它们的名字我都忘了。我太喜欢它的尾巴。以前我用 babywipes擦老鼠.然后我用孩子牙刷去刷洗它的尾巴。每个两星期我洗它的鱼缸。对,它没有笼子。它住在鱼缸里。。。当然里面没有水 :)
    不洗鱼缸的话,鱼缸会臭死了。
    三年后它死了。我有时看她在梦想里在梦里看见它。
    最后的句子让我想起来乌达木。不好笑。


    Your story is very interesting! I like it!

    you have some problems in this writing:

    1、Chinese and English are sometimes interlinked. The content of each person is to be included in double quotation marks.

    2、 In Chinese the pronoun of the animal is " 它"  . It has the same meaning as "it.".

    3、The sex of the animal is only the female and the male. Like 母 and 公 in Chinese.

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    Please, correct my mistakes

    История компании:
    Октябрь 2015: основание Intersnack Foods Ltd
    Февраль 2016: продукция впервые появилась на полках в магазинах
    Сентябрь 2016: более 300 точек продаж в Москве и Санкт-Петербурге


    历史的公司:

    二零二五年十月: “Intersnack Foods Ltd”的成立;
    二零二六年二月:在商店第一次产量;第一次出现在商店的货架上的产品
    二零二六年九月: 在莫斯科和圣彼得堡有多三百多个销售的点。


     точки продажи  именами 

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    October 14, 2016
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    Practice NPCR H1-2

    我是Christophe
    我很忙, 我是老师,我是比利时人,我说英文和荷兰语。这是我的朋友,他说德文。我妈妈爸爸都很忙。我要吃肉,我要喝可乐。

    Please pay attention to the role of punctuation marks.

    Your chinese writing is very good!

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    我在工作很无聊。

    我看着我的顾客,听着他们说话,我学了很多可是还是有很多问题。一个顾客有一切美国梦告诉我们必须。(这句话的意思我不是很懂,是不是想表达:这个顾客告诉我们必须有一个美国梦? I don't know the meaning of this sentence. Did  you want to express your thoughts that a customer tell us that we must have a American dream?)他有很多钱,一个漂亮的妻子,一群孩子们,一个很大的房子。他很外向,和气。他应该很高兴可是我看见他每天。我看见她每天都很高兴。我在一个酒肆工作所以有的时候我每天会看见某谁他,他有很多问题。我在找一个新工作,新生活中,我对幸福得决定什么事有意思。(我幸福得觉得什么事都很有意思)


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    HSK4 - 写句子 7

    词汇

    1) 聚会

    这所大学的学生们每个月搞一次聚会 / 明天有一个语言交流的聚会,你想参加吗?

    2) 联系

    有什么问题可以随时联系我 / 你和大学同学还有联系吗?

    3) 差不多

    尽管他说得很快,但我差不多听得懂他说的 / 我每天差不多7点起床。

    4) 专门

    今后你就专门学习汉语好了 / 我的专业是数学。其实我是浙江大学去年毕业的。

    5) 毕业

    还有一年,他就大学毕业了 / 我今年上大三,明年毕业。

    6) 麻烦

    这件事儿很麻烦,我们需要你的帮助 / 麻烦您帮我拿下杯子好吗?
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    October 14, 2016
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    Do many students in your country study this subject? (ACCOUNTING) Yeah, I think there are a lot of students study this subject in my country. Because the policy of encouraging people to start a business, the small and medium sized enterprises of our country are developing and growing, which leads to the increase of the demand for accounting personnel.. Because of the shortage of accounting personnel makes the accounting person’s salary considerable so that more students are willing to study this subject.
    October 14, 2016
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    What subject am I studying? I'm doing accounting. I think accounting is a useful and practical subject in cultivating people' s rigrous and it gives me a lot of experience. I think accounting can help me find a pleasant job. It will make me more rigorous and serious so that I can make a good progress in my field. When I am studying acoounting, I can find like- minded friends. Maybe that way, I wil make my work more efficient with the help of my friends. And our friendship will be more secure. Thoes are the reasons why I choose to study accounting.
    October 14, 2016
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    Personal statements Hello! I'm Simon Williams, a boy comes from China. My native language is Chinese. My Chinese score in my school time is 130-140( total Score is 150). I can speak a little English. So I want to exchange my languge with a person who speak English. I like sports, such as swimming, and running. I like traveling very much. China has many beautiful scenaries , I would upload the beautiful photos to the weblog later.
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