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    往梦想条路的第一个阶段

    我总是抱着一个很轻松也很矛盾的心态来实现我这个梦想。当自己不是依靠这样来生活,养家糊口/*生活is similar as养家糊口,so we hardly use both them in one sentence.but there are some differences between them,so you can't think them are equel.,就不会这么积极。所以进度就比较慢。

    当一有空的时候,也同时也有灵感的时候,才会有这个推动力往前走。

    突然想到一些虚构的事情,或者有趣的事情的时候就会马上把它记下来,要不然就很快会忘记了。

    (you do very well,but in Chinese there must be two spaces before the first word of every paragraph.)

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    October 10, 2016
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    hsk 五级, 写短文

    昨天晚上我陪了姐姐去机场. 她的航班十点半起飞所以我们提早两个小时早从家离开.
    由于路上堵车因而所以我们决定坐地铁去机场.但是地铁站里太拥挤所以我和姐姐过了半个小时后才离开.
    他我们感到很幸运能按时坐上飞机, 不过航班迟到了两分钟迟到降落.
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    October 10, 2016
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    My first day This is my first day to use this.I love english but i can't speak it very well.I know this by an app named Weibo,which is similar as Twitter.So today i decide to try and hope i can make progress here. On the other hand,i also wanna make friends here.I hope my world can be more large.
    October 10, 2016
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