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I love ramen.
I would mostly have it whenever I don't want to have  rice or I have no time for dinner.
I usually eat it at night but sometimes I also eat it for lunch whenever I'm so busy at work.
I like the ramen noodles but I don't like the soup.
A lot of people drinks the soup after they eat the noodles or add rice to the soup.
I always abandon the soup.
I usually cook ramen on my own.
I have my own recipe to make yummy ramen.
I put onions, an egg, green onions, chili and dumplings in my ramen.
I eat ramen with vegetables because ramen is an instant food.
It's unhealthy.
Lastly, there are a variety of tasty ramens in Korea. They are really yummy.
I can't get enough of eating ramen.

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Being open to another civilization and culture is very important for us to build our personality. I feel sometimes, for most people, it`s a little difficult to get out from our safe zone to discover other things and other people but I am sure that the first step Is always difficult. When I see someone diffirent from me, I find a problem to take the first step to know him or to discuss with him even if I am very curious. "I am talking about people from a different religion or culture ....,," but when we break the barrier I find myself very excited to ask about every thing different between us.

I love cooking

My passion is to cook. When I have time and my mom is doing something in the kitchen, I would help her since I love to cook. I love making pancakes and baking muffins. And I also like healthy food, because it is good for people to eat healthy. But also in some days you give yourself pedes. I like preparing all kinds of meals and my mum teaches me to cook new types of Spanish food. Sometimes I would cook pancakes for breakfast for my brother and he likes it a lot. He likes the pancake with nutella.  It is so very nice. But I don't cook pancakes for breakfast all the time because he also needs to eat other food.

Date: 2016.10.15 Day: Saturday In this terms, date is used mostly with a complete month/day/year while day would be the days of the week (Sunday-Saturday).

Dairy 3-2

Next day, is when be booked the trip. 
We woke up at 5:30 am so as not to be late. 
Then we walked to the bus stop and we are still sleepy.
Anyway, we met the guide and boarded the bus. I sat on a narrow, small sit and curled into a ball...
Meanwhile, I was suffering, the guide explained some attractions.
He seemed so smart and he explained so well that I was not sleepy anymore.
By the way we went to the beach, it was the same as other we saw, and we boarded the ship to meet dolphins!! We barely saw any dolphins, but was able to catch a glimpse of a dolphin's tail for only 0.3 seconds. 

I'll say I would use both the second choices for the two different sentences.

Passing Under A Rainbow.

Can you imagine passing under a rainbow as if you go through a tunnel?!
I did it yesterday. In addition, I saw the starting point of the rainbow for the first time in my life. I had never ever thought I would have passed it one day. Afterwards, I figured out that the other rainbow came out from the previous rainbow as if they are twins.
In Iceland, a rainbow appearing seems to be a frequent phenomenon. (In Iceland, passing/walking/driving/riding through a rainbow is considered a common experience for the locals.) In fact, this kind of phenomenon is quite usual, according to my host. In other words, people do the same as usual as I did, but I was just impressed for my first experience yesterday. How amazing it was!!...
I have only stayed on the west side of Iceland around Reykjavik; although nature has already amazed me many times. This country is wonderful. I am sometimes  at a loss of words. I just say "Wow!". This time, I must say that this is one of my best expedition ever.