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Hi. I kindly suggest these corrections.
1. Both presidential candidates have huge number of partisans.There is redundant use of the word the
2. One of our project members postulated his own strategy on how to deal with our management issue.
3. Mt. Fuji represents the most lofty mountain of Japan.If you would like to use representative, it must pertain usually to a person. So how about this sentence instead.
Mr. Steve Hopkins is our company's representative to the conference tomorrow.
4. I enjoy seeing a myriad of stars every night.
5. The U.S. government stipulated the Japanese government to change its law after World War II.
6. Playing table tennis was proven to help people prevent Alzheimer's disease.Substantiated means to strengthen something most usually used for proof of evidence or arguments as in an investigation or a case trial or a statement made.
Her statements were substantiated by the evidence gathered by the police
7. A question asks you to synthesize each claims between the passage and the lecture.
Thank you.0 votedSeptember 29, 20161
