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- Un nuevo grupo de facebook ¡Hola! Me gustaría enpercer un grupo en facebook. Es llame “Buenos Aires Positividad”. Los membeos de esto grupo hacen los cosas creer un mundo mas positivo. Par exemplo un evento llame “Un día de los embrazos”, donde los memberos (meet) y offiertan embrazos gratis en la calle o en un parque. Tambien esta grupo discutan los actividades por los pobres como piden los memberos por artículos por el pobre. Espero que esto grupo es un lugar por forme amistad y creer más positividad. Memberos postan lis actividades y ideas. Gracias y Like o Follow esto grupo.September 17, 201800
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Learning new words
I (am) learn(ing)English. I have a goal. I (wonder) why (would I)do that and what (opportunities would ) open for (me) if I could increase my (fluency). (Currently, I have a problem.) I have (a) bad memory, maybe not so bad, but I can't (absorb so) many new words. I watch videos, I read books, and I chat here and on/with other language apps. When I see a new word or phrase, or especially a verbal phrase, I notice it and analyze it, in the sentence, and try to make an example for myself...but there are just too many new words! Sometimes I think I haven’t learned any English.0 votedAugust 30, 20181- Mi viaje y los tensos de los verbos Yo voy a viajar en una semana proximo. Pero tengo un gran problem con verb tenses. Solomente por que sor una principiante en el idioma espagñol. Por favor puedes escribar el form correct por la palabra un ingles. Entonces mi cuanta será muy mejor. Hoy yo (visitar) un gran museo. Yo (mirar) los pinturas después (desayunar) con mi tres hijas. Yo (was thinking we would see a lot of sculptures) pero (we ended up seeing more paintings). El proxímo días (we are planning on visiting with my family). (I hope after breakfast we will watch a movie) pero (we may rest at the hotel instead.). (I would have liked to sleep in) pero mi hijas (desperitir) más temporada. (I had wanted to buy) un regallo en museo pero todas las cosas son caro. (I have had ) el mejor tiempo (manejar) driving y (mirar) (seeing) todas las cosas en cada estado.September 28, 201650
- A hora A hora estoy en la casa. Tengo mi bébe en mi brazas. No tengo un diccionario. Mi hija está dormando. Tengo dos otras hijas ellos miren la télevision pero normalmente ellos leen o juegen con sus cosas. Estoy cansado porque mi bébe no duerma el noche. Pero es normal por madres están cansado. Hoy yo llamó con un hombre espagñol. Yo estoy tratando hacer mejor mi comprendar el idioma espagñol. Poco a poco y paso a paso. Cada día yo practico. Yo leo, escucho, escribo, y hablo en espagñol. Es el unicó (way). Yo vivo en norteamerica en la país se nombre los estadosunidos. Es un país bien concoces yo creo. Haha. Tengo tres hijas y soy casarse con un hombre muy inteligente. Es importante por mi porque en pasado si tengo un novio menos inteligente que los otros,yo rompé con él. Entonces esto es mi historia mientras estoy sietando en el sofá.September 27, 201661
City vs country
Nowadays Today there are many people who move to the country from a city. In my opinion the advantages of apartment living are: apartment conveniences, opportunity to use the Internet, (you can use the internet in the country in America) the convenient location of stores closeness of shops and supermarkets, possibilities the ability to make a career at a big company. These advantages attract people to live in a city.
Nevertheless, especially retired people especially tend to move to a village small town (in england they use the term villages in america we do not)for having in order to rest from hurried way of life in a city. They prefer to do gardening, to breathe fresh air, to eat natural food and to communicate with neighbours. I consider think it is helpful to spend time out of a city because such kind of leisure is vital for people's health.
I would like to add that I prefer a country lifestyle because it is more natural.and the other crucial reason is that it brings me back to my picturesque childhood in a summer house surrounded by forest.
To sum it up, in conclusion people choose their own place of living, to live but if you want to improve your health and feel atmosphere of experience country living you should definitely choose to live in a village.(anything in () is my comments, i deleted a few small words like "a", overall good)
0 votedSeptember 27, 20161- El premiero En dos semanas yo viy a viajar. Yo viy a visitar mi familia y muchos ciudades en el sud del estados unidos. Yo estoy féliz porque yo creo el viaje será muy divertido. Voy a viajar con mis trés hijas - tenen seis años, cinco años, y uno y medio años. Yo creo que el bébe será problema algunas tiempos. El viaje será por trente días más o menos. Es un tiempo largo. Voy a visitar doce estados. En la media de viaje viy a quedarar en florida. El hermano de mi esposo va a casarse...September 27, 201660
- Collaboration is usually in business or music. They collaborated on the album. The play was a collaboration between the students and the faculty. Cooperation is between anyone. I was glad the kids cooperated to solve the problem. Your cooperation in listening to the emergency instructions is apreciated.0 votedSeptember 24, 20160
"Computer games"
Hi everybody. Could you correct my writing?
'' Playing computer games is a waste of time. ''
Most people believe that computer games are just a waste of time and they bring only cause problems/disadvantages. In fact, some games are full of blood, violence, and sex, which are not appropriate for children. In addition, playing compulsively you can become addicted to them thereby, isolating yourself from any form of social contact. (Verb tenses should be the same so either can become/will isolate or becoming/isolating)
However, a few games may can be a useful and interesting tool for children to learn something in a different way, that might otherwise be boring to them from textbooks. ( this sentence is awkward to correct because you are expressing too much in one sentence) For instance, history and geography games, where you have to fill in the missing word.-For example, fill in the missing word games for history or geography would be more interesting than reading from a textbook.
Personally, I think that playing computer games can sometimes be a funny fun pastime, without as long as you don't overdo it. overdoing it. Sadly, nowadays this amusement has become a very worryng worrying trend. (Awkward better to say "sadly what used to be just an amusement has no caused some to be concerned " To counter this hurtful potentially damaging habit, there are many other things one could do, such as doing outdoor sports, reading or conversing with others something else.0 votedSeptember 21, 20162

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