Could you please tell me whether my text make any sense to you? ( Practice for IELTS writing test) As the average age of people grow older worldwide it also brings up questions, for instance in Britain, on whether the government should finance cares provided to elderly living in retirement home or, on the contrary, should it be a family matter?. Growing old is not a choice but an aspect of life that no one can deny and will experience sooner or later, regardless of the job people are involved in or how much they earn. Although I tend to think that the government should be financially more responsible for taking care of retirement homes,I don't leave out the fact that family has also a role to play. On the one hand, old people have usually participated in raising country's growth and making it thrives, thanks to their works they provided as well as taxes they were required to pay so that those can be invested into building, new highways, hospitals, schools,just to name a few. That's why looking after them should be considered as one of the governement's duty and priority. However, besides the fact that love and values towards loved ones can't be omitted, family should contribute as well especially when it comes to buy new clothes or anything that could be related to personal belongings, and also in order to make sure elderly live in a safe, healthy and clean atmosphere. In a nutshell, I must admit that it is quite tough to lean towards one or another and think that both the government and family need to pay for cares because, beyond the financial aspect, they all somehow owe to elderly.

Could please anyone give me any feedback about a practice IELTS writing test that I wrote? Here is a "mock up" ielts writing test taken from the task 2 that I wrote today and this is the Iink to know what the task is about : https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/prepare-test/practice-tests/writing-practice-test-1-general-training I would be grateful to you if anyone could go over it and give me some feeback as well as score it based on the IELTS band score so that I can have a roughly idea about my writing level. Thanks a lot. Thanks to technologies the access to knowledge from home has become so easy nowadays that parents start thinking more and more about teaching their children at home. There appear to be advantages on both side of the spectrum. Firstly, by teaching home it would allow parents to focus thoroughly on subjects they would like their children to learn. Another interesting upside to point out is the amount of time, shared between children and parents, might develop strong bonds with one another, and as a result could lead to a more peaceful environment. On top of that a tremendous amount of money could also be saved as no canteen fees would be involved. However, teaching in schools brings positive effects to children that sometimes can't be provided anywhere else. For instance, professionalism as well as the ability to teach efficiently are part of the factors that shouldn't be neglected as it is vital for children to evolve in a healthy and safe environment. additionally, It is very important that children get accustomed to interact with other human being so that they can socialize themselves and be able to fit in effortlessly, find a job and eventually raise a family. In my view, those two different ways of teaching should be considered as complementary and also seen as a reminder that, even though children go to school, education shouldn't be overlooked as it is an ongoing process and that it needs to be paid attention to even outside schools. On the other hand, parents who teach from home should also ensure that their children practice team activities regularly. By doing so, I believe a good balance could be found.

Could please anyone give me any feedback about a practice IELTS writing test that I wrote? Here is the link to the subjects of the tests: https://takeielts.britishcouncil.org/prepare-test/practice-tests/writing-practice-test-1-general-training Task 1: Dear Guillaume, First of all I wanted to thank you for agreeing to take care of my dog and my house while I'm away. Before I mention the tasks that I would like you to do here are my contact details in case you encountered any issues. The name of the hotel is " The riviera" and my phone number is the 0212045126, feel free to ring me up at any time. My dog should be fed once a day, the food cans are stored in the back of the closet just underneath the sink in the kitchen and the bowl is located near the front door, and please make sure the water bucket next to it is full as well. While you're at it, could you also have a look at my mailbox and bring any mails into my house. Thanks again and keep in mind that I will make it up to you as soon as it is needed. Sébastien. Thanks for reading and commenting my test!.