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    How would you say "I'll do it after I finish drinking this cup of coffee" Context: this is part of a dialogue where the reader understands that the action being referenced here is to finish writing a letter to their mother.
    October 17, 2018
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    Countdown for <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">the </font><font color="rgb(0,0,0)" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">H</font>olidays

    On <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">S</font>unday<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> I told you <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(would be better to say "On Sunday I mentioned how...")</font> I wanted to pack my bag for the holidays. Now guess who hasn´t packed <strike>any</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">their</font> bags yet? Me, you are right. I look forward to hop<font style="background-color: yellow;">ping</font> on the plane  <font style="background-color: yellow;">Wednesday</font><strike></strike> and <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">al</font>though I <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">don't </font>have not much time left, I can`t get myself to <strike>finally</strike> pack that freaking stuff. I don`t know, maybe I<font style="background-color: yellow;">'ll</font> just throw in a few dresses<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font> <strike>and</strike> <font color="rgb(255,0,0)" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">some </font>flip<font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </font>flops, a bathing suit and call it a day.

    We got a brand new dog<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);"> </font>tag for our pug today, just in case she gets lost in <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">S</font>pain<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">.</font> (I hope not, of course) <strike>and</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">We also </font>arranged a special holiday for our big, old dog (she is to big to sit with us in the cabin and is afraid of IATA Boxes). Our old dog will stay with my hubby<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">'</font>s parents and we bought her a huge bone as a surprise present. And <strike>with</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">when I say</font> huge<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> I mean huge<strike>,</strike><font color="rgb(0,0,0)" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">.</font> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">I</font>t`s called mammoth bone and I <font style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(Would be good to insert something like "and I can't help but wonder..."It makes the writing flow a little better)</font> wonder what species the bone <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">it</font> is from. It`s enormous and our old dog loves it, <font color="#ff0000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">in this moment  </font><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(0, 255, 0);">(It would be better to say "currently,.." or at this very moment..")</font> she<strike> sits</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">is sitting</font> in the garage in front of the car and <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">is</font> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">waiting</font> for the giant hunt to come out. But it won`t until tomorrow. I told her but she thinks I am kidding. Now<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> I am waiting for the laundry to get ready, I washed the old dog<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">'s</font> <strike>ladys</strike> <strike>sleeping</strike> pillow because our <strike>pug baby</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">baby pug</font> pooped <strike>into</strike>  it. Of course, probably because she hated the stinky laundry detergent and wanted to deodorize the whole thing to smell more like ... whatever. Like <strike>pug-poob</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">pug poop</font>? I am so sorry <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">for </font>bring<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">ing up</font> that topic up<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</font> but it crossed my mind ... Have <strike>all</strike> a bright and <font color="#ff0000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">shiny </font>(would be better to say "sunny"  or just write "have a good day") day and don`t think too much about things little pugs do :) I`ll attach a picture of my <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">pooping little </font><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">angel </font>pug :)

     

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    August 29, 2016
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    A time for thinking

    Sometimes, we need time <strike>for</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">to</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> </font>think<strike>ing</strike>. <strike>Stress in the day</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Daily stress</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> </font><font color="#ff0000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">and</font><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> </font>(would be better to say .." ,as well as,") other things don't <strike>permit</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">allow</font> us to think <strike>in real important acts</strike> <font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">about the </font><font color="#ff0000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">important things that truly matter.</font> (Or you could say ... the important things in life)
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    August 27, 2016
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    Diary of my life in Canada August 26

    I cooked Japanese cuisine for my friends.
    I think it was so-so. I was wondering if <strike>the</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">it</font> taste<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">d</font> <strike>was</strike> good or not.
    For foreigner<font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">s</font>, Japanese cuisine is sweet. We use "みりん" when we cook.
    みりん is a kind of Japanese seasoning. It makes the <strike>cook</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">dish</font> sweet.
    Yesterday, I used sugar instead of みりん because there was no<strike>t</strike> みりん in the kitchen.
    I think I put <strike>sugar too much</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">too much sugar</font>. I shouldn't have <strike>put</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">added</font><font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);"> </font>sugar....

    Anyway, my friends ate my cooking <strike>well</strike>. I'm happy <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">to</font> for cook for them.
    They ate <strike>much</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">a lot</font>, and I ate <strike>that</strike> as much as <strike>them</strike> <font color="#000000" style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">they did</font>.
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    August 27, 2016
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