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    how about it,

    The weather is going to rain It will be raining. i I suggest to don't forget that you bring your umbrella

    "The weather" can't be combined with "is" in this sentence so I recommend using "It will be raining" because this will sound more fluently.

    "i" is always written as a capital letter "I".

    "to don't forget" is a double denial which means "remember" so that should be replaced... 
    But you used "suggest" and if you couple that with "remember" you'll get a very odd sentence that isn't considerd proper English.


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    August 25, 2016
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    You made a wrong decision

    If you don't talk to me, stay away from me.
    If you don't trust me, stay away from me.
    If you cheat me, stay away from me.
    If you hurt me, stay away from me.

    If you kiss me, stay close to my mouth.
    If you hold me, stay close to my skin.
    If you support me, stay close to my pain.
    If you love me, stay close to my heart.

    If you don't make me happy, don't give me any hope.
    I prefer to keep you in my mind than lose you in my real life.
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    August 25, 2016
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