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I think "They" refers to break in's. As you can see break in's is plural therefore using they. It could also refer to the windows. It's a it's a bit ambigous in my opinion

In my opinion it sounds better to say "I must say I was not fond of Trevor at first but now I count him as one of my best friends" Or "I must say I didn't take to Trevor at first but now I count him amongst one of my best friends" What do others think?

Hi there! We don't usually say "ripe" for liquids such as milk.If something is being cooked we will say "until it is cooked" Hope that helps

"One of the most iconic attractions " That is the preffered way to say it :)

Hello I tried to answer it for you. I hope it helped

You can say that but you could also say Did she swim today? Don't forget to add "a" in runny nose. "Because of a runny nose" If you need any extra help let me know ;)

This means that he was not including or talking about his physical appearance. It was more than just his physical appearance. Such things might include hia personailty, interests and skills.