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Good friends are really nice. They're there to support you and to help you whenever we you are really need help. They make you laugh and feel good. I'm lucky, I have to have her as my best friend. very good friends. Sure, I have lots of other friends. But this person is the only one I would take a bullet for.

Comment: Very good attempt but many of the sentence are repetitive (e.g.: there are two separate sentence for hobbies that can be combined to one). Try not to repeat the same thing over and over again in the passage. There are quite a lot of grammar mistakes, it would help a lot if you can improve your grammar. By the way, this is suppose to be in the English section, no?

Glad to see you have such a good friend. Keep up the good work. Terus berusaha dan semoga berjaya.

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When I first met For the first time I knew her, we didn't talk to each other but when after we got to know each other are introduce ourself eventually we became closer eventually. (You should talk about how both of you started talking). We shared our favorite place during lunch time at food court Shah Alam (This doesn't really makes sense, I guess you are saying "We had our own special spot in the Shah Alam food court" or "We shared a table in the Shah Alam food court" ?) . She respects my feelings and helps me always. We shared many of our favorite Many things of us like hobbies, favorite place, etc. are similar. 

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I have a best friend in my life and she is like a my sister to me when we are together. We are close together and have been friends since year 2013 and until now. Her name is Bella Natasha. We live in at different states in Malaysia. but Both of us we are all studied at the same place (university/college would be better instead of "place") and but different courses. My best friend is someone special whom I can share my all feelings with.