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Girls Night Out

I went out for dinner and drinks with my girlfriends last night. We went to a Vietnamese restaurant first. It was so packed and noisy. But we had a lot of yummy food and had a really good time. After the restaurant we went to a nice bar in town. They were also very busy.

We felt that we are very lucky to be living in New Zealand, because the country has managed the covid situation well from the beginning. Now our life is very close to "a normal life". (Period in quotes = American style. “Example.” Period after quotes = European style. “Example”.)

But still, no one knows what's coming next in the future. We have to enjoy what we have now.

my corrections:

Hello everyone, today I write about shapes. The shapes are: rectangles, sparse (I don’t know what this is), triangles, circles, ovals, and more. The first shape is the triangle. Triangles are used for traffic signs and triangle rulers. The next shape I will write about is the rectangle. The rectangle has four sides and four corners. The rectangle is used for pictures and passwords. The next shape is the pentagon. The pentagon has five sides and five corners. The next shape is the hexagon. It has six sides and six corners. The next is the circle. It has a round shape and doesn’t have any corners. It is used with clocks and fans, where the face is a circle. I can have more shapes but I don’t no what can the have sides and corners (I don’t know what this means or what you’re trying to say). Next is the square. The square has four sides and four corners. It can be seen in the shape of your house.