This is my assignment.
The title is"Some people think it is a good idea for university students to have part-time jobs. Do you agree or disagree? "
I agree
with that people who are university students
to should have part-time jobs because I think it can be
used as preparation and social experiences for jobs. Therefore,
by having part-time jobs, not only
can they
can learn how hard
it is to get money but
, they can
also learn polite conversation (
skills*). After having part-time jobs,
and when students get
a job, they can
be have a good to start
for to work.
Thank you for reading.
*You don't have to add skills, but it sounds more natural.
-Hope this helps^_^