星期三，七月十三日

我今天早上陪我的女儿到飞机场，她要坐飞机去斯洛文尼亚.

『中文句子一般不会说太长，前半句话中国人一般会这样说，“今天早上，我陪我女儿到机场”，后半句的问题是应该用“要”字表达意图与目的。

Chinese sentences usually are not too long, the first half part of this sentence is more likely to be spoken like “今天早上，我陪我女儿到机场”, and the second part of it is lack of a character "要", which is used to express a kind of intention.』

在十三点我去了游泳池，游泳了一个小时。

在下午一点我去了游泳池，游泳了一个小时泳。

『中国人习惯用十二小时制来表达时间。如果想要表达做某动作持续了多长时间，大多数时候可以把动词拆开，将时间放在中间，比如“看书了两个小时”一般说成"看了两个小时的书"，但是要注意，"了"字要跟在第一个字后面。

Chinese people are accustomed to exress time in 12h. And if you want to convey that you did something for some time, it's better to take the verb apart and add the time between the two characters. For instance, “看书了两个小时” is more likely to be expressed like "看了两个小时的书". But pay attention, the first part of the verb should be followed by the character  "了" .』

以后我家里吃了饭，休息一个小时。

之后我在家里吃了饭，休息了一个小时。

『中文中的"以后"一般的意思是"从今往后"，如果先表达"在那之后"，应该用"之后"。发生过的事情，动词后应该加"了"，不过要注意，上句话中将动词拆开的做法在这句话中不适用，对于"休息"来说，一般是不拆开的。

The words "以后" usually mean "from now on", and if you want to say "then", you should better use the words "之后". For the action that have happened, there should be a "了" following the verb. And pay attention, the way we talk about verbs in last sentence is not suit for the words "休息". In general, "休息" should not be taken apart ( which means, we don't say "我休了一个小时的息")』

现在我写这句话，觉得很游戏。

现在我写下这段话，觉得很有趣。

『“这句话”在中文表示单数，如果想说“这些句话”，可以用“这段话”或者“这些话”。

"这句话" means "this sentence", so if you want to say "these sentences", you could try "这段话" or "这些话".』

请你们给我指正。

希望这些解释能够帮到你:)

I hope these explanations can help :)