Did I write this correctly? would you like to check it for me? A university is a community of men and women devoted to the preservation, increase, and application of knowledge. Nowadays we usually have different purposes in universities. The meaning of university means to moat of students a skill, a good job and a brighter future. For me, I have following purposes to go to university. Firstly, I want to improve my comprehensive skills including learning skill, communication skill, and capacity to deal with difficulties. Since in university, we will have not only more free time to study which we like, but also the chance to join in more activities held by the Students’ Union and students organizations. Those will help us promote the abilities in many aspects instead of studying merely. Second, I want to meet and make friends with more excellent people in university. Since I can communicate with many people including students and professors, I can learn much from them. And I believe that getting along with the excellent will make me progress.

College Students’ Job Hunting Nowadays, there is a phenomenon that most college students find it difficult to search for jobs after graduation. Numerous elements contribute to this job hunting difficulty. The reasons are listed as follow. Initially, students have difficulty in hunting jobs on account of their lack of anticipate for the future career and their inappropriate views on career choice. On the first hand, a thorough plan for the future career is imperative as it can provide you with instructive guidance. Students who have no opinion of their future career are likely to get confused when they are hunting jobs. On the other hand, inappropriate views on career also keep them away from choosing jobs. Most students overemphasize on high salary and best working condition, which makes them refuse many suitable jobs on the first glimpse. What’s more, the contradiction between college students’ employment intention and social demand is also a key factor which results in the difficulty of job hunting. In conclusion, both society and students themselves should endeavor to solve this issue. As for social level, the government should encourage enterprises to provide more job opportunities for college students. But the most important thing is that college students themselves should improve their capabilities to meet social demands and gain more opportunities.

Did I write this correctly? would you like to check it for me? An Introduction to A Painting This is a square oil painting. It depicts a person looking out of a window from inside a room. There is a bottle of wine, two glasses and a fruit bowl on the windowsill. Outside the window is a large balcony with red-green awnings. There are four people and a dog on the balcony. They look like a family. They all have brown hair and they all wear straw hats. The parents accompanied a brother and sister. Father leaned against the railing to enjoy the view. Mother who leaned over the railing and cupped her chin is chatting with brother. The little sister whose hat has some pretty flowers is playing with the Long-haired dog. There are a lot of lush green plants outside the balcony. Not far away is the sea on which many sailboats float. The painting is dominated by green, red and white. Bright colors make us feel of vitality and comfortable. I seemed to hear the sound of the sea and birds chirping. After looking at the picture, I realized that life is better enjoyed at a leisurely pace.

Could you please correct my sentences? Thank you! An Introduction to A Painting This is a square oil painting. It depicts a person looking out of a window from inside a room. There is a bottle of wine, two glasses and a fruit bowl on the windowsill. Outside the window is a large balcony with red-green awnings. There are four people and a dog on the balcony. They look like a family. They all have brown hair and they all wear straw hats. The parents accompanied a brother and sister. Father leaned against the railing to enjoy the view. Mother who leaned over the railing and cupped her chin is chatting with brother. The little sister whose hat has some pretty flowers is playing with the Long-haired dog. There are a lot of lush green plants outside the balcony. Not far away is the sea on which many sailboats float. The painting is dominated by green, red and white. Bright colors make us feel of vitality and comfortable. I seemed to hear the sound of the sea and birds chirping. After looking at the picture, I realized that life is better enjoyed at a leisurely pace.

Could you please correct my sentences? Thank you! If a chef wants to a licensed of cooking pufferfish, he must have two to three years of professional training with carefully study and then pass a hard test. How difficult is this test? Based on data from previous years, about two-thirds will be eliminated. According to the report, some homeless people is too hungry to look for food in restaurant trash cans and have died from eating the poisonous parts of pufferfish. Therefore, the discarded parts of pufferfish must be stored in locked boxes to avoid being eaten by some people. Because the fugu is poisonous, a knives which used to prepare fugu are not allowed to touch any other food.

Could you please correct my sentences? Thank you! Last year, China braces for compulsory garbage sorting, with Shanghai taking the lead. Shanghai residents are required to sort garbage into four different categories. Including hazardous waste, recyclable waste, household food waste and residual waste. Its regulation covers reducing the amount of garbage produced at sources, ensuring separate transportation of different trashes, upgrading treatment and promoting social participation.

garbage classification in Shanghai Last year, China braces for compulsory garbage sorting, with Shanghai taking the lead. Shanghai residents are required to sort garbage into four different categories. Including hazardous waste, recyclable waste, household food waste and residual waste. Its regulation covers reducing the amount of garbage produced at sources, ensuring separate transportation of different trashes, upgrading treatment and promoting social participation.