Hi Ahmed, just listened to your recording and here are a few notes. First off, you need to speak a little more clearly, and the pronunciation of the word including. Also, the process you mentioned was it called 'chunking'? If so, it needs to be pronounced a little differently. I think the sentence " Including allows information from the outside world..." doesn't make grammatical sense. If you wanted to add on from "Memory is the process in which information is encoded, stored and retrieved." then is should read more like: Memory is the process in which information is encoded, stored and retrieved. Including, allowing information from the outside world... Allow needs to be changed to allowing.
Hop this helps. :)