Hi All Which one is better? 1. In contrast, Africa, Central Asia, and Southeast Asia have industrial use proportions of less than ten percent. 2. In comparison, the proportion of industrial use in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia is less than 10%. 3. In comparison, the fraction of industrial use in Africa, Central Asia, and South East Asia is less than 10%. Thanks for your help

Hi All Could you help to correct below graphic The primary worry is whether the punishment would harm the kids' health or result in significant psychological harm. For instance, hitting kids with a stick or broom too hard would make them swell, possibly even get bruises, and even more likely leave scars. Some parents or teachers prefer to scream, berate, or threaten students. According to my own experience, my parents threatened to take me to the police station if I disobeyed them or to jail if the police caught me, which made me fear the police even when I needed their assistance. It took me many years to get over this experience. Thanks for your help🙏

Hi All What’s “complete chicken” / “biggest coin” meaning ? 1. Amy: And I was a complete chicken but you helped me to get over that 2. Moreno: Yeah, that’s a great question because Ontario has smaller hills and the snow quality is not the best. I mean, it’s like freezing rain, things like that is what I mean by quality. Where in British Columbia, the mountains are bigger, steeper, of course like you said, but also the snow quality is dry, a very big, fluffy. I call them toonie-sized snowflakes. Those big snowflakes the size of our Canadian toonie. Amy: That’s right. The biggest coin that we have in Canada. Thanks for the help

Hi All Need you advice which sentence is better. Since the flu broke out, the government has been imposing vaccines on all the children under 10 years old Since the flu broke out, the government has imposed that all children under 10 years old should take the vaccine. Thanks for your help

Hi All Which one is better? 1. When I was going to my best friend's wedding, my motorcycle broke down on the way. My motorcycle broke down on the way to my best friend's wedding. 2. He is the most brilliant person I've never met to break down all the difficult questions He is one of the brilliant people I've never met who can break down all the difficult questions. Thanks for the help

Hi All Can I put "will" after "laptop"? -> When my laptop will be fixed Thanks for your help

Hi All 1. What's " to be by" mean? The kitchen, which is currently located next to the staff working area, will be moved to be by the entrance. 2. Do the sentences below have the same meaning? After being left to ferment for two weeks, the wine is sent to be pressed. After having been left to ferment for two weeks, the wine is sent to be pressed. 3. Before "," the sentence seems not to be finished. Why? Where the reception is, will be a large meeting room. Thanks for your help

Hi All Is below sentence correct? Also, for goods, it will be an effective way to transport by train due to it can handle high volume freight Thanks for your help