"My leadership".....Please read it and correct it, I would appreciate it. Than you :)
I consider myself as an active, motivate and determined person. I think leader-LIKE skills ALREADY appeared in mi MY childhood, as an indigenous woman I grew up <s>with </s>surrounded by amazing people and in an amazing land <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">,</s> ; there , my leaderSHIP skills <s>where</s> WERE trained AS A CONSEQUENCE (due to the) OF MY INNER NEED TO DEVELOP AND SHAPE my OWN culture. Since my EARLIEST DAYS I <s>always </s>have ALWAYS been related to contest, competitions and any type of event which MIGHT ENABLE ME (<s>have </s> *OR help me) to INCREASE MY NATURAL DISPOSITION TO leadership POWER.
As a leader, I feel particular interestED <s>for </s> IN organizing activities or events where people related to the geosciences area COULD have access to relevant information. At the end of my time in college, as a part of my mandatory social work in a Primary School located in a rural and indigenous area, I started a Science club <s>which </s>WHERE children had the opportunity to learn about all scopes of science, from medicine to chemistry, FROM physics to the environmentAL SUBJECTS, but mainly about Biology. There I had presentations, organized activities, and WORKED OUT BRAND-NEW material. We had discussions ON how to use this conceptual basis for applications in the real world. (At the end of my time there *JUST NOT TO BE TOO MUCH REPETITIVE*) WHEN I COMPLETE MY WORKING EXPERIENCE THERE, most of the children <s>which </s> WHO were members of the club, showed a high interest BOTH IN keeping ON studying disciplines SUCH as biology and natural sciences, AND IN STARTING SOME BRAND-NEW STUDIES AIMED AT ACHIEVING IN A CLOSE FUTURE a degree (related) CONNECTED (or LINKED ) to biology AS WELL.
Learning English and being a Spanish NATIVE speaker HAS ALWAYS BROUGHT ABOUT LOTS OF fantastic opportunities FOR ME TO enhance my PECULIAR skills: I established communication with some geologistS and geophysicistS from all over the world: as <s>the</s> A result of thESE relations, I had invitations to write and publish a few articles in some small <s>sciences</s> SCIENTIFIC studentS' magazines FROM foreign countries, such as New Zealand and Spain. I ALSO wrote about HOW <s>the</s> Biology <s>field in Argentina, how it </s>is taught IN ARGENTINA and the advances IN THIS FIELD MADE THERE. As a result of these articles and my POSITIVE influencIAL skills, many studentS, whom WHO had PREVIOUSLY LEARNED ABOUT THEM, become interested in visiting Argentina, SO AS to study AND SOME OF THEM EVEN apply for an exchange program at any university in thIS country.
SO, I am <s>a</s> confident ENOUGH TO have strong leadership <s>and influence </s>skills, which makeS me a suitable candidate <s>successfully manage the challenge of being choose for a scholarship, </s> TO SUCCEED IN BEING SELECTED FOR A SCHOLARSHIP: I hope you <s>bestow </s>WILL GIVE me <s>that</s> THIS CHANCE AND honor.
