can you find some mistakes? The amount of children born to women between 40 and 44 years old in Australia are represented in the table, these data were gotten since 1981. it can seen that the women with two children in 2006 have 38,3%, so it is the data highest in the table, also the table shows that it was higher that other results during 2006 such as the women with four or more children with only 11,0%, moreover, the category one child with 7,6 % is the lowest amount found out in Australia during 1981. other important data that the table shows is such as data linear growth between the women without child, with one child and two children since 1981 until 2006. to conclude, through years and with the information collected, the table can show that the women with two children is the most common, it can see because in this category always presented the highest percentage in comparison with other categories; finally the women in 1981 had a high data, but through years this number was decreased since 27,6% until 11% in 2006

please, somebody can check my essay. and how to be more formal? please, somebody can check my essay. and how to be more formal? I want to use more linking work, phrasal verbs and passive voice, can you help me? the used of animal to benefit or entertainment of people should be illegal in the world, however if the animal does not suffer, this won't be a issue. I agree with this statement due to the next. during many years people and animales have been together, in many cases an animal is the best friend of the man, nevertheless other people have been using the animals to having some type of benefits, for example through world many circus have traveling to different cities or countries realizing shows with animals, almost alls circuses use the wild animals like main event and this is a big problem because the people enjoy to see them, but they don't know that the animals is suffereing because these animals are in cell and they aren't in their natural habitad. Also, the circuses have to pay expensive amount by the exotic animals, this is a important factor because people want to earn this grat amount of money and they is moving to the animal's home to catch them and next can sell them. On the other hands there are competitions that have like goal search and kill animals, for many people this is a interesting sport such as the duck competitions which the winner is who killed more ducks. finally we can find people that liked have things made with animals, the rhino's killer is clearly an example, these kind of people enjoy kill the rhinos and cut parts of their body, other people have tools made with animal's skin or tooth. to conclude, all these activities should be illegal in the world, however there are many countries have laws about this issue, they is getting over the problem thanks the governments, on the other hands, nowadays people don't enjoy the animal's shows, actually the circuses have changed these shows like form of recreation, also people have take awareness and prefer don't buy things made with animals, finally there are many organizations against of used of animals to people's benefit, with the helped of the government y the laws about killed and transportation of animal out their habitad.

agreed and desagreed with the cloning The cloning is a topic that has been sounding since many years, and we can watch it in movies, we were thought that it was mere science fiction, nevertheless, nowadays the cloning is a true and some scientistcs have cloned the animals, probably, they are trying to clone humans. This method for many people is a good because having benefits, though , there are argument religious that being against it. due to the new technology, researchs in the medicine and new abilities in the doctors, the cloning open the way to the future; and brought benefits with it, so people with cancer or people with sick organs can get over its thank to the cloning. They can clone their organs and change them. for example if people were cloned, they would have organs avaible to when they become ill, moreover, the cloning could help to the all population, specially the boys or people than are in middle of the war. However, the cloning is against the religious, because there are text religious about the creation of the humans by God, then, this to many people is a sin, especially in south America, that the religious became very important in the families, furthermore, there is other point of view, this is the justice, if a scientist create a person and the next he kills him, for him organs, in this case, it is a crime, so, the scientist will be a murderer. To conclude, I’m not agreed, because all benefits that the cloning brings, will be with the life of the other person. This is a dilemma but in my family and me the religious is very important, though, for me the cloning is a crime and a sin