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    My next holidays

    I would like to travel to London next summer to speak to English.

    I visited London six years ago. I received a scholarship to study English for three weeks. I lived with an English family who had a very big house very big. The house had a huge garden, six bedrooms, two bathroom, and a terrace in the last top floor. I used to attend to class every day. there I met many people from different countries. We spoke a lot, so we improved our English.

    Nowadays (this word is used correct but a bit literary, in more informal writing most people would simply say "now") my dream is to travel to London, visit of my English family, and remember those incredible days those which were incredible!
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    June 21, 2016
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    Edgar Allan Poe - The Black cat

    Recently I read about a short story, written  by Edgar Allan Poe. Likewise, most stories had written by Mr. Poe, <em>The Black Cat</em>, isn’t a lovely story. It’s about a mad, cruel and drunk man, hunting for a cat ghost, that he makes really bad. (I didn't understand this clause, but I haven't read the story.) In the story, he (the narrator? tha author?) says that alcohol makes him a mad, and horrible person.
    The Black cat stared tell us, (this clause doens't makes sense but I am not sure what you mean to say.) like the narrator love animals. He (the narrator? the authors?) told us he grew around by animals, he takes care of them, plays with them, and spends most of his time with them. When he got married, he adopted(?) his wife's lovely animals too, and they had birds, fish, a dog, and a cat. The cat was their favorites. Named Pluto, it was a large black cat, lovely and beautiful.
    After several years, Pluto was like a best friend, but some changes in his life made the man, violent and angry. He tells us that alcohol makes him sick and he became a heavy drinker. Their marriage was so sad and they fought and argued every day. As time passed, he stopped taking care of the animals and become a nervous, angry, violent, cruel, evil man and husband.
    He was so evil he did a terrible thing to Pluto. He cut her eye out of its socket one night, because, the cat bit him after he tried to catch her by her neck. Another night, he arrived at the home, very drunk and killed the cat.
    Suddenly, a strange thing happened in his life. The house when they lived caught fire and the shape of a cat was outlined in the wall of their bedroom. The man was frightened and began to feel sorry that he had killed it.
    However, some days afterward, he found another cat exactly like Pluto and immediately decided he wanted the cat. In fact, he had no idea where it had come from. The new black cat, loved him, but, after a few days he hated it again. Every day the man had more fear of and anger with the animal. One day, he and his wife went to the cellar; the cat followed them. He exploded in anger and took an ax to kill the cat. His wife caught his arm to stopped it, then, he drove the ax deep into her head, killing her. There was a horrible murder.
    After he killed his wife, the man was calm and evil. He decided to hide the body behind the walls of the cellar. The police had visited his house, but they had found nothing. The moment the officers left the house, they heard a sound. The sound was almost like a baby crying. The policemen went to the cellar, followed the sound and started pulling out the bricks from the wall. In minutes, the body of his wife was found. Strangely, on top of her head, sat a black cat.

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    June 21, 2016
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