Introduce myself

Hello everyone!
My name is Phong. I'm 21 years old.I am Vietnamese, I come from Ha Noi. I'm a student and I'm studying at Hanoi vocational college of technology. My hobbies are listening to music, watching movies,..and learning english. I'm friendly, funny,kind and pretty lazy.
Nice to meet everyone, thanks for reading.

Hi Phong, well done!  Only one correction!

My text about the New Year holidays.

Please check my text for mistakes. Thank you very much)
What is the best way to spend time during the New Year holidays?
This year the New Year holidays last 9 days in Russia. Some people like to spend the New Year in hot countries, some stay at home with their families.In every city there are a lot of entertainments for children and adults.The best way to spend time during the holidays is to do outdoor activities. You can go skating, skiing or sledging with friends and family. New Year is a family holiday - spend more time with people close to you. (or 'your nearest and dearest')

Well done Elena, I have made some corrections to make it more natural.  Please note that my corrections are British English.

Postcards

When I was a child we used to exchange postcards on celebrations with our friends and relatives. With the coming of the Internet era this tradition has died. Nowadays we send each other e-cards. It’s good as it saves trees, but it's not as  nice as receiving a real card. However, a few of my friends have started to send each other cards from holidays. As I’m far away from home and it’s Christmas time I have an idea to resurrect the old tradition and send cards on New Year. However, the problem is how to find out addresses but not to spoil the surprise.

Good writing and a good idea!  You maybe need to do a little revision on 'articles' and the 'present perfect'.

Happy New Year

Louise

self-introduction，

I AM ZHLLH.I AM a MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENT.I AM OUTGOING AND I LIKE SHARing EVERTHING.I LIKE MATHs AND HISTORY. I THINk THEY ARE EASY FOR ME. I LIKE PLAYING BASKETBALL BECAUSE PLAYing IT CAN HELP ME GROW UP .I PLAY IT TWICE WEEK AND at WEEKENDS.I LIKE ACTION MOVIES BECAUSE I THINK they're EXCITING. LAST SUMMER HOLIDAY, I WENT TO JIANGXI.I PLAN TO GO TO YUNNAN NEXT SUMMER HOLIDAY.

Good writing, try to use a mixture of capitals and lowercase so that you can practise which words need capitals!

Happy New Year!

Write on 31th December

Hello everyone，I‘m very happy to find this website today. I read a lot but I write very little.I think writing is more important than speaking. Because someone xxxx can understand me even though I make mistakes when I talk to him.But I can't be understood via an essay if there are a lot of mistakes. I live in Shanghai and it is nearly the New Year, 2017. I wish you all a Happy New Year. Thank you for browsing my short essay!

Good writing and, although I agree that writing is important, I think that speaking is more important in today's world!

Happy New Year to you, we have to wait another 8 hours in England!

Ordering food

- Hello sir. Can I help you?
- Can I have a look at the menu, please?
- Yeah..... What dishes would you like?
- I think I’ll have a banana to begin with
- What would you like for your main course?
- uhhh. Please give me a dish of fried chicken, and... What is this?
- Ah. This is fish sauce.
- Oh, It looks so delicious. What is it made of?
- Its made of fish, tomatoes, onion, garlicx, a little soy, pepper and vegetables
- Ok I'll have it.

- And what to follow? Would you like fried potatoes? 

- What are they like?
- They are very tastyl. They are served with vegetables and chilli sauce if you like.
- Perhaps I’ll take it.
- Would you like something to drink?
- I will order later.
.......
- Enjoy your meal, sir!
- Thanks.

Bad mood

Someone told me that he would celebrate New Year with me,but today I am still alone. You know what is funny?  I thought that i would not care, but i care so much.

Well I wish you a Happy New Year from England!  :-)

Good writing but be careful with punctuation.

Food topic

Today due to xxx globalisation we can learn about food and eating customs from all over the world. Nowadays food is a hot topic: magazines, TV shows, Youtube channels, blogs, books; it seems that everyone is obsessed with food. The world is hungry but can our planet satisfy this irrepressible human hunger?