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Hi, there! My name is Jina. Since I had worked as a book editor for about 5 years, I'm good at Korean grammar. If you want to correct your Korean sentences and to make your expressions smoother, I think I can give you some help. Also, recently, I'm trying to improve my English speaking skill.
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    오늘 진짜 피로한(or 피곤한) <font style="background-color: yellow;">(+날)</font> 이<font style="background-color: yellow;">예(->에)</font>요

    = 오늘 진짜 피로한(or 피곤한) 날이에요. 

    어제저녁<font style="background-color: yellow;">(->어젯밤; last night)</font> 5신 만 잤어요(->5시간밖에 못 잤어요; I slept only for 5 hours). 그런대<font style="background-color: yellow;">(->그래서; for this reason)</font> 오늘 진짜<font style="background-color: yellow;"> 피로한이예요.</font><font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: yellow;">(-></font>피곤해요 or 피곤한 날이에요.)</font> 지금 잘 거예요.

     = 어젯밤에 5시간밖에 못 잤어요. 그래서 오늘 진짜 피곤해요. 지금 잘 거예요.

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    June 14, 2016
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    숙제 #4

    나의<font style="background-color: yellow;">('나의' is ok. you can also use '내' which is abbreviation for '나의'. '내' is more colloquial.)</font> 친구들<font style="background-color: yellow;">(->친구들은)</font> 할로윈(<font style="background-color: yellow;">+</font><font style="background-color: yellow;">을</font>) 좋아<font style="background-color: yellow;">,(->좋아해요.)</font>

    = 내 친구들은 할로윈을 좋아해요.

    그렇지만 (<font style="background-color: yellow;">+나는;</font> you missed a subject) 할로윈(<font style="background-color: yellow;">+을</font>) 별로 안<font style="background-color: yellow;">(need one spacing)</font> 좋아(<font style="background-color: yellow;">해</font>)요.

    = 그렇지만 나는 할로윈을 별로 안 좋아해요. 

    매 학기에(<font style="background-color: yellow;">마다<font style="background-color: yellow;">;</font></font><font style="background-color: yellow;"> you can use '에' but '마다' is better in this case. '마다' is a kind of postposition that strenthens the meaning of '매(every)'.)</font> 나의 친구들(<font style="background-color: yellow;">+은</font>) 할로왼(<font style="background-color: yellow;">윈</font>) 파티(<font style="background-color: yellow;">를</font>) 있어요.<font style="background-color: yellow;"> (->열어요)</font>

     = 매 학기마다 나의(내) 친구들은 할로윈 파티를 열어요.

    할로왼<strike>하고</strike> 겨울 할로왼<strike>하고</strike> 여름 할로왼(<font style="background-color: yellow;">이 있는데<font style="background-color: yellow;">,</font></font><font style="background-color: yellow;">; there's no verb)</font> 이(<font style="background-color: yellow;">번</font>) 여름 할로왼은(<font style="background-color: yellow;">에서</font>) 나의 의상이(<font style="background-color: yellow;">은</font>) 포켓몬 팀 로켓(<font style="background-color: yellow;">로켓단; Korean calls team Rocket '로켓단'</font>)의 일원이었다요<font style="background-color: yellow;">(->일원이었어요. but some koreans use '다요' in their end of sentences for being more friendly mood. ex) 밥 다 먹었다요, 이태원에 왔다요, etc. these expressions are not formal and grammatically wrong.)</font>
    = 할로윈, 겨울 할로윈, 여름 할로윈이 있는데, 이번 여름 할로윈에서 내 의상은 포켓몬 로켓단의 일원이었어요.

    도<font style="background-color: yellow;">(?; i think you missed some letters)</font> 지난주<strike>에의</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">(지난주 or 지난주의)</font> 수업은 향을 있어요.<font style="background-color: yellow;"> (can't figure out what this mean.)</font>

    =??

    다음 주에 시작해야 돼요. <font style="background-color: yellow;">-> perfect!</font>

    내 서(<font style="background-color: yellow;">선</font>)생님은 뜰다해요.  <font style="background-color: yellow;">-> can't figure out what this sentence means.</font>

    아마 돈을 받을 거예요<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>?</strike>(.; period mark instead of question mark)</font> 


    어제 장학금을 받<font style="background-color: yellow;"><strike>었</strike>(았)</font>어요.

    = 어제 장학금을 받았어요. 

     

    이젠 입학 허가서<strike>가</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">(를; should use objective postposition)</font> 기다<strike>를</strike>(<font style="background-color: yellow;">릴; original form is '기다리다'</font>) 거예요. 열심히 일하겠<strike>읍</strike>(<font style="background-color: yellow;">습</font>)니다!

    = 이젠 입학 허가서를 기다릴 거예요. 열심히 일하겠습니다!

    끝. 안녕히 계세요!<font style="background-color: yellow;"> -> good</font>

     

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    June 13, 2016
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