Dear Diary,

It's been a nice day. Today I watched two English movies: "harry Potter and the goblet of fire" and "Flipped". It's really interesting and moved me a lot. Harry is an outstanding and emotional lovely boy, in times like these, I reckon that I will get a big crush on him, <s>exactally</s>exactly. Flipped is a romantic and fascinating movie, I always someone be able to meet the chosen one. Writing <s>diarry </s>diary every day, until now, my objective is simple, I will hang in there, but of course very few people can do it.

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Hi Shannon

Your English here is pretty good, so keep up the good work!

Especially, I like your last sentence.

Here are a few focus points for you:

-Remember to make a space after dots and commas.

-You have some spelling errors and I have marked some of them

I highlighted the word 'someone' because I could not guess what you meant.

Mit brev til min mor

Hej mor

Det er lang tid siden, vi har set hinanden.

Hvordan har du det? Jeg savner dig.

Kan du huske, at du håbede at jeg købte en villa.

Gode nyheder, juhuu! jeg er lige flyttede til en ny villa i Horna. Jeg ejer den.

Den er stor<s>t</s>, boligarealet er hele 268 m2.

Jeg bor sammen med min kone, Farzaneh.

Jeg synes, villaen er så god<s>t</s>. Den har en stor have med nogle smukke træer. Jeg er spændt.

Jeg ville ønsker du var her.

Jeg elsker dig. Pas på dig selv.

Din søn

Treating illnesses

People often catch a cold in autumn and winter. To <s>have</s> get it you need to inhale infected air after someone has sneezed or coughed, because there are a lot of viruses in the air. There isn`t a special medicine for treatment. You can only reduce the symptoms. The best thing you can do is <s>having</s> to get plenty of rest, <s>keeping</s> stick to a healthy diet and drink<s>ing</s> a lot of fluids. The more you rest or sleep, the more energy your body can divert to fighting the cold virus. <s>Keeping</s> Maintaining your healthy diet, especially <s>when you</s> by avoiding junk food and fat products, will help improve your rate of recovery. Try to base your diet on vegetables and fresh fruit. In my opinion, the most important thing <s>of</s> in the treatment of cold is drinking plenty of fluids. It prevents dehydration and helps your body to get rid of the viruses.