It is not very convenient to travel by air. First, It is stressful to pack and make sure that you have done everything correctly ready in order to get through airport security. There are many rules and regulations that travelers must follow. We need to arrive at the airport very early to get through security and make it to your gate on time. On top of that, the Air in airplanes is often very dry so I also need +like to ++use (or bring) plenty of moisturizing lotion. Despite of /Regardless of these inconveniences, air travel is the fastest way to travel over long distances. For short distances, or domestic travel, in domestic, I prefer to travel by the high speed train, which is very comfortable. If I travel abroad, I will have to travel by air (or plane/airplane).

+Because you prefer to have lotion, it is a want/like rather than a need

++ you can use use or bring here, depending on when you like to use your lotion. If you take it on the plane with you, you should use the word bring.

When As we grow up, we will face many choices and encounter many difficulties. +When I graduated and failed my postgraduate education, I felt deeply unhappy and lost any interest towards everything. I was not well for a long time. And I doubted my life. To be honest, I am do not feel positive person towards life. Somebody wouldn't think so, because I just [usually/often/...] hide myself in deep thinking. I Sometimes, I [can/have] tend to be brave, because I live for myself and anybody can help me. I must fight for myself. As time flies, I become more and more independent and used to being alone. I also enjoy the sense of loneliness. It gives me peace and space to think about my future life. Meanwhile, It also makes me feel comfortable. Somebody may unlike stay being alone since because it lets them they feel afraid or something else. But as for me, I sometimes also have the same feeling especially when I need some a favor. As the saying that goes, everyone is [in?] an unique universe.

+In English, you cannot fail and graduate. Unless you wanted to say: Before I graduated, I failed [some/several/many] courses of my postgraduate education. then you could say that.

The presented data shows a change of food budget composition of average families over four decades from 1970 to 2000. In the first set of pie charts, it is shown that the family began to spend increasingly more money on restaurant meals. The second diagram shows that not only do families spend more money on restaurant meals, there is also a shift toward spending money on fast food meals over the years. As it is shown in the pie charge, families in the 1970s spent only 10% of their food budget on restaurant meals. The proportion of budget declined gradually and families have spent 15% of their food on budget on restaurant meals. The same number was increased to 35% by year 1990. By 2000, the average families were spending half of their budget on restaurant meals. The second graph shows that while the general food budget for restaurant meals have increased,. T there was a new trend of eating out at fast food restaurant starting at 1980s. By early 1980s, the proportion of meals eaten at fast food restaurant has surpassed those eaten at a sit-down restaurant. By year 2000, 90 fast food meals were eaten per year as supposed to 50 meals at a sit-down restaurant.

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This is very well written, and I think your analysis is correct. I just wanted to bring your attention to a misplaced period towards the end of your paragraph. I believe it should be a comma.

Today I'd like to write something about the a toy in from my childhood - a hand made kite that has been kept by me I've owned for many years., and I'd also like to take the opportunity to discuss the importance of toys in our lives.

It's My toy, a big dragonfly-shaped kite made from silk and split bamboo, which was a birthday gift from my grandpa, who's who was an artisan specailising in making handicrafts like paper cuttings, wood carvings, lanterns, and kites. It used to be very hard to come by a decent toy when I was a kid, because my family was quite poor, so my my parents wouldn't give me money to buy expensive toys. The kite was the best toy I could ever get, so I was very excited and grateful when receiving the gift and I've cherished it very much. It was is still kept in my wardrobe. It brings back old memories whenever I see it.

With the kite, I had many chances to experience some interesting things, like taking part in kite-flying competitions during kite-flying festivals, and playing with flying the kite accompanied by with my friends on the countryside road. I have to say it was a good companion more than a plaything to me in my childhood, and it is a really good traditional product, which involves many cultural heritage aspects and cultural deposits in my hometown.

I believe toys are an indispensable part of everyone's childhood, which not only give us joy and happiness without being bored and lonely, but also boost our intelligence and shape our character.

(Thank you if you could help me with this essay!)

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1) Two different topics need two different sentences. Topic 1 is describing your toy, part 2 is about the theme.

2) Defining the topic, and changing the tense.

3) "accompanied by" is technically correct, but it sounds strange. Also, cultural deposits doesnt make sense in this context.

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I also think toys are things that can hold lots of sentimental value. I have a bear that has travelled the world with me. These items can help bring us back to different times and places. I think your kite sounds lovely.

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