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Dream
If you have a dream, protect it.
—— The pursuit of happiness
Everyone would have some dreams about their future job when they were just a child, for example, to be a policeman, a teacher, or a scientist, etc. After they grew up, they would
be more mature to choose a job according to some objective factors. Some will still pursue their dreams although they can't do it now.
I also have some dreams in my different stages of age. Recently I'm obsessed
by with writing. Originally I just want
ed to improve my English ability. Then I found that it is a good approach to not only raise my English level, but also share my ideas with others here. Furthermore when you get some support
s and encouragement
s from others, it will give you more power and confidence to insist in fulfilling your dream. The invention of the Internet which connects people from different corners of the world provide a good platform for us to communicate and know each other's opinions in some fields and therefore increase our own outlook after absorbing various viewpoints.
