HI Alexander! Your first one is totally fine. “Would it be possible that there were people here who had never seen this?” - this is technically, grammatically ok. But, we would normally use "could" rather than "would." In the third one, it would read better like this: “There should be a rule here whereby certain people had permission to do so” For the final one, it is debatable if we use an 's' for more than one fruit. As an American, I never use 's' with fruit, even if there are 1000 pieces of fruit. :)

A friend asked me to teach her poetry. The thing is, I know she's not interested in poetry that much; it's just that, she wants to find some topics I am also interested in. You see, I like poetry very much. My works were published in our local newspaper when I was a teenager. Recently, I have been very lonely, so reading poetry is the best way to combat loneliness instead of spending money. Furthermore, we also read the Bible together. This is the first time that I've taught poetry, and it's hard to choose. Last week I decided to choose Jiang Kui's "Secret Fragrance". "Secret Fragrance" and "Dappled Shadows" are among the most quoted and admired works by Jiang Kui. Of the two poems, "Secret fragrance" is written in a comparatively lucid style, and it has an English translation and Pinyin available. When I taught it, I found that it was more difficult than what I had thought. For example, when we read “何遜而今漸老” (He Xun is now aging), I said, "Jiang Kui sees himself as an aging He Xun". She asked, "How do you know that?" And i decided to introduce Zhou Bangyan's "Prince Lanling" this week. A famous example in his description of willows and the parting of friends in the lyrics to the tune of "Prince Lanling." But more questions were raised. The more I read poems, the more I understand "the reason I continue giving lectures is that I hope to leave something behind for those who enjoy Chinese poetry, something that might help them get a start in learning it," which is what Professor Florence Chia-ying Yeh, who passed away in Tianjin, once said.

Today, I went to Round One of a competition after classes. At Round One, I played medal games, darts, and pool. When I got home, I had mala soup for dinner. Tomorrow, I have to go to college for make-up classes. In fact, I have English and biology classes tomorrow. Furthermore, I have a biology test next week, so I need to study a lot. I also have a part-time job tomorrow, so it’s going to be a really busy day.

Could you correct this please I’ve been listening to a lot of (it would be good to say what kind of podcasts here, like comedy, political, historical, etc.) podcasts lately. One of the interesting phrases that I learned was “thank you for having me”. Now, I’m imagining that one day I will be able to use this expression during interview .☺️ Very good job! We wouldn't say "thank you for having me" in an interview, however. We would use this when we go to someone's home for a meal or a party. For an interview, we would say "thank you for the opportunity to interview today." :)

Today, I stayed out late and came home from a karaoke place in Omiya in the early morning. My friend had to go to the hospital in the afternoon, so we took the first train home. Before we went home, we ate beef bowls at a placed called Yoshinoya. After that, I got a stomachache. Because it was a weekday, the train was congested, and there were no available seats. It was tiring. Since I was exhausted, I slept until I had to go to my part-time job in the evening. This was another good writing example! Some of my corrections were to upgrade the vocabulary used, and also connect your ideas a bit more smoother. Keep up the great work - writing everyday is a great way to improve your English!

Today, I went to Ueno with my friend. We went to karaoke and had dinner together. We ate Korean food because we both really love it. . It was boiling hot today, but we still had a really lgreat time. It was really good to spend time with my friend, and I want to go to Ueno again someday.

Nowadays, it's summer in São Paulo, Brazil. In fact, the temperature is almost 30, so it's very hot. Good job here! It does sound super hot. It's about 35 degrees everyday where I live. I can't wait for colder weather! Keep up the great work!