HELP!!! I need someone to correct me this text please and the last I wrote some min ago. Thanks :D

Hi Jim,
I'm in Italy and this is incredible! It's the first time I've been here and i completely fell in love . I'm here because my cousin is studying in Rome.
we'd like to see each other when I return.
LOve clara.



Late in the evening I heard a loud knock on the door. I was completely asleep and I woke up immediately.
How strange was that... I walked to the main door and I opened it. I couldn't believe what I was seeing! My brother Victor, that had been working in Australia for 2 years, was standing in front of me, with a big smile on his face.
I ran into his arms and I hugged him.
After the shock I invited him to come into my house.
We spoke for hours, he explained to me everything about the two years away from home.
Now I remember that day as the best day ever!