What spanish accent are you learning? Mexican, Spanish, Cuban, etc? You should not worry about the accent my friend. You indeed will do yourself a favor if you accentually sound like the natives of the country you are visiting. What you should be cautious of is vernacular. There are words which are not received well comming from someone not deemed a part of the native speaker group. Just stick to formal spanish. Learn but try not to utilize slang. My native language is Mexican Spanish and the slang is very colorful and important within the Mexican culture. I would nevertheless advice a foreigner to shy away from employing slang and curse words in Mexican Spanish until enough intuition for such vernacular has been accumulated. Example, in Mexico people use the word güey to refer to other people, as an interjection as an exclamation and otherwise it has various uses. This word which has a dictionary traslation to english of Bull has interepretations that range from "Bro!" to "Dumbass". If you are not careful such a simple word can get you into trouble. In short, I do not think making the effort to learn one of the correct accents by which your target language may be spoken. Go for it!

I vote 2.

CHOOSING UNIVERSITY: AN IMPORTANT ISSUE

After graduating at from high school students are required to decide in which university they will choose to continue their studies. Analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of each university is an essential step so     (instead of so try¨to ensure¨)  that the students take the best decision. Some of them prefer small schools (no comma here) whilst a vast majority have always been dreaming  dreamned about the largest universities in the world. Myself, I would always want allways wanted to enter one of this important universities (no comma here) for the reasons I’m discussing in this essay.
First of all, a large institution directly implies a wide range of opportunities, which might not be available in a smaller school. The fact that this kind of these universities has have more money brings you the possibility of choosing among a bunch of different programs. You, therefore, will will therefore find what you have are looking forward for. Not only does the college destiny send allof its founds to the education area, but also the investigation programs are usually up-to-date, very innovative, and led by famous professors as well.
Regarding work, getting a degree from a prestigious school where quality is guaranteed  gives you an advantage when applying for a job or internship. Internships or extracurricular practice in companies take are part in of the degree program and give you the chance of gaining valuable experiences. Amid a vast quantity of students and graduates in college, you may make a lot of contacts and friends. Nowadays the professional networking is vital for PhD students or workers, so you should develop it.
On the other hand, there are some pros of studying in a small school such as the individualizing learning you could get from professors because the classes are not so overcrowded. Students can ask things during the lessons and get the most of them, instead of in large universities where you may be more distant from the professor.

Sadly, tuition fees and proximity are the major issues to be considered when applying for to different universities and not the quality of the education as well as  or the preferences of the applicant.

Some corrections for you :). Also made it sound a bit more natural if you are interested. :D

Trudge :)

Right now

Hello everyone, this is my second time in the Italki´s notebook.

I am writing here because one of my dreams is to talk with people from all around the world, without any langauge restrictions.
For my me the English was my first love. When I was a child I loved playing video games from Nintendo so I played my favourite games in this language, and in the rest of my free time I usually listened to the radio, and of course my favourite radio station transmitted only English songs

Nowadays I am still learning to make friends and getting a better possibilities( You could also use opportunities here, it sounds more natural)  in my career.

Good Job!! :)

I made a few corrections and added some suggestions. 

LOVE DEFINITION

'' love is a part of you". This means that just like other parts of your body ,you could also have the ability to control it,take care of it and change it.Do you believe this is possible?

Just a couple of suggestions :).

Hi :)

Today is the last day of the term and I got the  my academic report. My grades right now are a little low. Therefore, I hope to improve during the summer holiday, especially in English. I am good at Chinese because I love reading Chinese novels. I learn many beautiful words when i read novels. It helps me write great composition and  understand the clou better. However , I dont like to read English books. Can someone recommend an English book for Senior student? :)

Made a few corrections for you :).

Also, you should read "Sirens of Titan" by Kurt Vonnegut.

The birds secret

It was almost sunset, the light of the sun was falling from the side, making soft shadows, nature appearing in all its beauty. I was walking along the country field with my little sister. Silhouetess of birds sat on electric wires and preening their feathers. Then my sister asked me:
- Teacher told us, that if a man will touch this electric wires he will feel huge pain and can get to the hospital...Why birds sit there and nothing happening for them?

I thought for a few seconds. I knew that there must be some physical law but I forgot it and just said to my little sister:
- Because birds fly during the whole day and become very tired. They need an energy, that is why they sit there. They are charging their batteries from that those wires. Look at how that bird shakes! It's almost fully charged!

My sister and I looked at each other and instantly loudly laughed laughed loudly , the echo spread through the fields, and the birds flew away.