I personally like it a lot, but I have to say that unless there's an extraordinary coincidence going on here, the opening of them poem comes directly from some lines in an anime called Xam'd. But the last bit, "Lest it violate our very souls, our very souls! And "Our lonely souls should be one, Enemy to enemy at long last" are his own (atleast I haven't seen it anywhere else) and I like it. I actually added them into a facebook post I wrote of the Xam'd poem, attributing it to "someone" :-).