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Try to write a good introduction about human resources planning.
Human resources planning
Human resources planing provides a framework (you may want more specific/descriptive word)for a company. Its (it's = it is. its = belonging to it) purpose (purpose = the reason why it is done. Focus = the center of interest/activity) is to check the from staff's (belonging to it) competence (competence = the ability to do something successfully or efficiently), and to support and to hire employees (employees = staff). Human resources planning is very (very = the most, but 'very' is better here) important in some countries for many reasons.'important in many countries for a few reasons'
-If you are going to then list the reasons. If you are talking about a few specific countries, list them here instead of 'many'.
Human resources planning provides a framework for a company. Its purpose is to check the staff's competence, and to support and to hire employees. Human resources planning is very important in some countries for many reasons.
0 votedMay 14, 20161Aloneness or sociability
What do you prefer to do in your spare time ? What makes you happy and satisfied - to be solitary and isolated from people at home (for some time) in order to relax, just deepen in your thoughts, recall some pleasant memories in your head and try to assess your lifestyle or you are one of those people who prefer to spend their free time in a cafe or at the noisy party, hanging out with some close friends and acquaintances, just chatting and having fun? Which type of person you are?Solitary or Sociable?
What do you prefer to do in your spare time? What makes you happy and satisfied? To often be solitary and isolated from people at home in order to relax: just diving into your thoughts, recalling pleasant memories in your mind, and trying to assess your life? Or are you one of those people who prefers to spend their free time in a cafe or at a noisy party: hanging out with some close friends, just chatting and having fun? Which type of person are you?
Aloneness (You can say: 'someone is alone', but aloneness is not a word. Solitary is an adjective used when something is 'existing or doing something alone'.)
Sociability (is a noun that is 'the quality/attribute of being sociable'. Sociable is the adjective form of this word that pairs better with the adjective solitary.)
? (add a question mark ? to the end of the title because it is a question.)
"Friends and acquaintances" (repetitive because friend and acquaintance mean almost the same thing)
"(for some time)" (I do not know what you meant by this. 'often' means that this person would be doing a particular thing a lot. for example, someone who is 'often relaxing' relaxes frequently/a lot.)
deepen in ('deepen' means to 'go farther into'. It is not common to use deepen in this way. 'Dive' is a verb that describes someone jumping into something like water: for example, an 'Olympic diver'. 'diving' is the continuous version of the word, and works better here. Deepening would be the continuous version of deepen. http://en.bab.la/conjugation/english/deepen) ('into' works better with the verbs 'diving' or 'deepening', because it means "to or toward the inside of" and expresses the movement of the verb.
some (unnecessary)
head (mind: people's awareness, head/brain:the body part)
life (works better here)
which...are you (subject, verb, direct object)
0 votedMay 14, 20160
