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    I have a new life

    I an am a student study studying for a master's of interior design in Milan.
    I just moved home. I like this new house Becuase because there have a big balcony.
    There have many flowers on the balcony and have a big lounge chair. Sometimes, I sit here drink beer here on the 3rd floor. There's a chapel near the house. Every night a man paly plays the violin. There are a lot artists on the streets of Milan. I just finished a short fall in love. I am sad now, but I belive believe I will be happy to shand up.

    **Explanation**

    ** Yellow means a spelling or technical error.

    **Green means a grammatical error
    **Blue means a punctuation error

    In  the first line I corrected the grammar, as you are currently studying for the master's degree, not studying the master's degree

    In the second line, you are moving to a new place. If you move home, you are returning to your home or hometown, Maybe change to "I moved to a new house". Also, "there have" should be "it has" (the new house has a balcony) or "I have" (You have the balcony in your house), or "there is"(the balcony is there).

    In the third line, "There have" should be "I have" or "There are".

    In the fourth line you used "finished a short fall in love" which was very interesting, and I understand perfectly what you said, but it is not proper. You could try "I just ended a relationship" "I just broke up with..." "I am getting over a break-up" or other phrases. Sorry for the complicated suggestions.

    I don't know what you mean by " I will be happy to shand up" "Shand" is not a real word, and I don't know what word you were trying to write. Sorry!

    You also used the comma [  ,  ] symbol to separate sentences. Make sure to use a period [  .  ] symbol. That was almost all of your punctuation and syntax errors.


    Overall, your English is very very good!

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    May 13, 2016
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