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    能不能帮我改一下这些句子?

    我现在工作是一名法律助理,有的时候我会参加中文的客户会议。我平常能跟他们沟通,但是我不知道我说的是不是最自然的说法。能不能帮我改一下句子,改到最自然的说法? 谢谢!

    1. (背景:去候诊室找客户时) 您好,您是————女士吗? 请进来。我叫————,我是一名法律助理。您好吗?找好我们办公室吗?请找到我们的办公室好吗?
    (Context: When calling a client from a waiting room) Hello, Are you/Is this Ms. ___? Please come in. My name is ___, I am a Legal Assistant. How are you? Did you find our office okay?

    2. 我们今天会议的房间在这里。(今天我们将在这个房间里开会议)
    We will be meeting in this room today.

    3. 谢谢您跟我见面。我们今天会把您的一些文件做副本,也会让您签名一些文件。
    Thank you for meeting with me. Today we will just be making some copies of your documents and having you sign a couple forms.

    4. 您觉得舒服合适的话,请您在这里签名在这里。请您有问题的话请问随时问我。 (如果您有任何问题请随时问我)
    If you are comfortable (agree with all that is written in the forms), please sign here on the form. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions.

    5. 我们今天会将您放在我们的候补名单里,这意味着我们从今天开始会开始为您找找一名代表您的公益律师。尽管我们会尽力为您找找公益律师,我们还是不能保证能够为您找到公益律师。 如果我们成功为您找到一名公益律师, 我们会立刻跟您联络。于是所以,如果您的地址,电话号码,或者电子邮件有所改变,请您马上通知我们。这是我的名片。如果您的联络信息有任何改变请您联络我给我打电话或给我电子邮件。如果您案子有任何比较大的改变请您也跟我联络,比如说,您向另外最值得到了律师的话请您跟我联络从另外的机构找到了律师。 谢谢您。
    We are placing you on our waiting list today, this means that we will begin searching for a pro bono attorney to represent you. Although we will do our best to find an attorney for you, there is no guarantee we will find someone to represent you. If we do find an attorney, we will notify you right away. So please, if your address, phone number, or email changes, notify us right away. This is my business card. Please give me a call or email if your contact information changes. Also please contact me if there is any major change in your case---for example, if you have found an attorney from another organization. Thank you.


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    我最幸运的时刻

    为了上大学去,我搬了到布利斯班。但是我搬的时候还不知道我会不会被录取到上大学。所以我跟朋友在这里消遣了。我等了又等。每天我把中文句子学会了都学会一些中文句子。我在家里工作。所以我的生活越发无聊了。然后,今年初我终于被录取到昆士兰大学录取了 (where to put 了 in this sentence?)。我把给爸爸妈妈打了电话。他们俩都很高兴。我感的很幸运。我可以学习很多语言。现在我可以用我的梦想用开启未来。
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    It depends on the transliteration of your English name and what‘s your Chinese surname.Makenzie---麦肯兹,it's strange in Chinese name,obviously is directly transliterated.If you care about this and you wanna a authentic Chinese name,宋若芊 is good enough. PS:why your surname is 宋,is your penpal also name of宋? There are many Chinese’s surname is宋
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    May 4, 2016
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    I don't think it's strange or rude,it's so normal.because many Chinese have English names,which have nothing to do with their Chinese name,like me.
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    I think your Chinese name is pretty good.I'm surprised you could have such a beautiful authentic Chinese name. I thought you may through the Internet ,but why I haven't meet such name,it's so wonderful,and even I want to change my name.
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    这是一封信

    Claire:
    你好!好久不见,最近怎么样?我没有给你一封信很久(我很久没有给你写信了)。我很太忙了。
    我是上大学一年级。我的专业是心理学。我除了学专业课以外,还学中文!我的中文怎么样?请别笑我。中文不容易,但是很有意思。我觉得发音有一点儿难,可是愈发不难。中文的语法比德文的语法容易。每天晚上我都练习写汉字。虽然常常练习写汉字,可是我平常总忘。我得多练习!常经常写汉字,就会觉得容易。我常常一边看电视,一边练习写汉字。
    下个星期有一个考试。因为我很紧张,所以我要准备很多。 暑假到了。下个星期五我回家。
    给我一封信吧!祝
    好

    你的朋友
    宋若芊
    四月三号


    (This is for my Chinese class oral presentation.)

    “愈发不难”用的很好,相当于 越来越简单

    希望你的中文能说的更好!



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    May 4, 2016
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    我的朋友正在住院呢

    (一篇短的文章)

    我的一个好朋友正在住院呢。她被自行车撞了,伤不重但是医生让她躺在床上休息。今天我带着花儿去看她,她很高兴我来了,我们聊了很多。如果明天检查完了她就可以回家了。
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    我们应该可以成为朋友! (让)我们做朋友吧!
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  • Corrected

    我每天都学中文

    我每天都很早起床因为在去学校以前,我想在italki上(我想通过italki)练习说汉语。虽然说汉语很难,但是很有意思。每晚上(每天晚上)我都看两分钟的中国电影。我觉得提高我的汉语水平越来越高。

    “好好学习天天上” --毛泽东


    你的中文说的不错,虽然语序上存在一些问题,但是都能够理解你的意思,希望你取得更大的进步!

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    May 4, 2016
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