Could someone correct it?

In my opinion the best thing you can do if you want to listen to a <strike>consert</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">concert</font> is attending it on live.
If you go to <strike>the concert of a singer</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">a singer's concert,</font> <strike>that you</strike> you will have a great experience because you will<strike> have</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">be</font> surrounded <strike>of </strike><font style="background-color: yellow;">by</font> people who sing your favourite song, clapping their hands to take the time and the atmosphere will be unforgettable.
<strike>So</strike> you will have a wonderful memory of that day forever.
Of course you will have to deal with some problems. For example if you go by car you might have troubles to park it, so you will be forced to go there really early and this could be tiring and uncomfortable. Because <strike>oh</strike> <font style="background-color: yellow;">of</font> this someone <strike>couls</strike><font style="background-color: yellow;"> could</font> say that it is more convenient watching the concert at home lying on the sofa. In this way you don't have even to pay the ticket and this will be for sure the cheapest option you can choose but I believe that nothing can compare with the experience you will have if you really go there.