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    My town

    I really have no idea what to write and I decided to tell you about my little town. The town is located in Western Ukraine. Just around 35 thousands people live here. The central part of the town is pretty nice, it has an Old town hall, benches, cobblestones, pigeons, and young moms with strollers and babies. I usually like to sit on a bench and read a book. Unfortunately, the ancient part of the center and of the whole town is either destroyed or in a poor state. There are underground tunnels, but I've never been in them.

    We are located pretty close to the border with Poland. Because of that  , consequently many people are smugglers. And it is not even that outrageous here.  :a lot of formally unemployed people drive fancy cars and border guards live in great houses.

    We have a polish church, which used to have a lot of polish people. Now the majority of them are gone.

    I used to live outside my town for quite some time, but I had to come back. I'd like to live in a big city again so I'm going to move once more. time

    Thank you for your time and corrections!


    Good Job! You just need to work on including definite and indefinite articles (the, a, an)

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    April 15, 2016
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    the 11st. notebook from Job

    Hi, do you found find any characteristic traits in my English notebooks? (Use the infinitive tense with the verb "to do").

    My sentences are fluency fluent when I talk speak professionally about my accounting professional, but I do not know how to say express myself when I want to talk about other things. (Be sure not to confuse nouns with adjectives - fluent is the adjective, fluency is a noun. Adding the "ly" to professionally changes it from an adjective (professional) to an adverb (professionally) which describes the verb "speak").

    Maybe the real reason is my poor vocabulary. I will have an interview with a foreigner interviewer tomorrow. ( "will" is mostly used when you are making or deciding on plans, once the plans are set you can use the present tense or progressive tense. In the progressive tense the sentence would be: "I am having an interview with a foreign interviewer tomorrow.")

    I am worry worried about my vocabulary. (Use the past participle of the verb "to worry" in order to change it to an adjective "worried").

    There are some ideas, which I do not know how to say in English. (Nouns following "some" should be plural. Adding "which" allows the second statement to describe the word which comes before "which". In this case the word is "idea") 

    I will make more preparing  preparations tonight. (Adding "ing" to the verb "to prepare" transforms it into a "gerund" (an active noun), in most cases gerunds function as the subject in a sentence - ex: Preparing fish takes five hours.) 

    Good luch luck to me.

    I hope this helps, let me know if you have any questions. I can look for common mistakes throughout your notebook enteries. Best of luck with your interview tomorrow! Daniel

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    April 6, 2016
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    The retirement home struggles with stuff  a shortage in staff. Furthermore, employees shun (avoid) work, as they go to the doctor to get a sick note. This cause results in a bad ambience at working environment, because 2 employees have to do a the work for of 4 persons. The workers who want to work in a proper way manner are often overloaded. (The past participle of a verb functions as an adjective) 

    The employees, who working with old people, should be physically strong, be patient and a little bit empathetic. If the work conditions are good, the employees can be also potentially also be happy in a retirement homes. If the rotation of workers is big, it often means often, that the things there don’t work aren't functioning properly.


    Sorry I had to break it off into two posts, let me know if you have any questions!

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    April 5, 2016
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    Retirement homes

    Nowadays, in Germany, retirement homes are very popular. in Germany nowadays. 

    Society is getting older, and generations don’t live in one house with children until they get old.

    1. What do you mean by society is getting older? Are you referring to the people growing in age? Or are you trying to say that the societal norms are changing?

    2. Who is "they" referring to in until they get old? Is it referring to "the generations" or to "the children"?

    Option 1 - The societal norms have been changing, and generations no longer live under the same roof as their children age.

    Option 2 - Aging is inevitable, and the younger generations no longer accommodate (house) their elderly.

    The idea of retirement homes isn’t a bad one, but what is very important in those such homes is organization. (Reserve using "these" and "those" to refer to far and near objects)

     A friend of mine attends a school for nursing of elderly people. His education is spitted divided into theoretical theory and practical part practice. 

    A few days in the week He only goes to the attends school on select weekdays and the rest of the week he works in a retirement home. 

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    April 5, 2016
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