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はじめまして! わたしのなまえはケイトリンです! 22さいです。 わたしはスコットランドじんです。 2012、2013、2015日本にいきました。 らいげつ日本にいきます!たのしみです! すこしにほんごがはなせます! よろしくおねがいします!
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    These days, I am worry about education. - are you worried about education in general, or your own enducation?

    I am worry worried about education. - In English we use the past tence for worried, even if we are worried in the present tence or future tence, but you can also say if you want "I worry about education" which means you currently worry in this moment.

    Actually, I was a university student in the U.S for a year. - "actually" dosent fit well in this sentence because its too premature to use it.

    But, I have had to go back to Korea because the university that I went to was closed by bankruptcy because it went bankrupt. - use 'have' if you are still in the US and is talking about in the future. Use 'had' if you are talking about you are now back in Korea talking about your experience.

    "Because it went bankrupt and my parents are not rich." Would be one sentence, try to not use 'and' to start a sentence.

    And my parents are not rich something. - 'something' does not make sence.

    And I really wanna want to (this depends how formal you want to be, wanna is still correct, depending on who you are speaking to) study in U.S. My major is Game of Visual Arts. I have to talk with my mom.

    Hope this helps! ^_^

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    October 30, 2018
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    Are you stating that making Peace is difficult?

    If so, I think there are two ways:

    "Making Peace is a Marathon" - stating that making Peace IS very difficult and long.

    "Making Peace is like a Marathon" - stating that making peace is difficult similar to running a marathon.

    Eitherway I think both make sence, it just depends what you are going for!

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    October 30, 2018
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    Dear Ms.Hoa

    I send a disbursement report for each staff in Ho Chi Minh area. Please find the details in the attached file.

    Please let me know if anything is unclear.

    Thank you for your help!

    Best and regards,

    *your name*

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    October 30, 2018
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    Introduction || こんにちわ! はじみまして! わたしのなまえわケイトりんです。 わたしわ20年齢です。 すこし日本語がはなせます。。。 よろしくおにがいします!
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