Connor, the meaning is contained in the word order. "Nous aimons tous les chats" means "we love all the cats." To say "we all love cats," you would switch the order of "tous" and "aimons," so that the phrase reads as follows: "nous tous aimons les chats."

Personal Statement for Oral English Class and Application

As we all know, the status of English in this world is irreplaceable, especially for those who are <strike>getting</strike> <em>pursuing </em>higher education, <strike>than the regular like us and who</strike> desire to keep improving, and <em>do</em> not <strike>just</strike> <em>want to </em>settle for <strike>a couple of trophies</strike> <em>success </em>in their <em>native </em>countries like <strike>thousands of successful businessman</strike> <em>most people do today</em>. If you want to share your ideas, your thoughts, and your achievements <strike>to</strike> <em>with </em>the world <strike>in wide</strike> <em>on the </em>international stage<strike>s,</strike> you’d better <em>learn</em> to <em>speak English well </em><strike>do well in your English</strike>.
I like English, and it’s not only because of its significance but also the convenience it brings to me. For example, when I’m watching American TV Series, <em>the </em>English that I have learned <strike>to some extent releases my eyes</strike> <em>reduces the need for constant concentration </em>since I <strike>cannot</strike><em>  don't need to </em>stare at the bottom of the screen all the time to watch translations. <strike>So, no matter</strike> <em>Thus, whether </em>for academic needs or personal hobbies, I definitely need to learn English well. However, traditional English education in China always emphasizes <strike>on</strike> reading and writing. From primary school to high school, <em>and </em>even in college, there are <strike>little chances</strike> few opportunities to learn and practice our oral English in class. Although many <strike>clubs in</strike> college <em>clubs</em> have been formed to do things like this and I <strike>do</strike> participate in some of them, it’s kind of different <strike>feeling between</strike> talking with a schoolmate in English and with a real English native speaker. <font style="background-color: yellow;"><font style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Now, it’s the time, and all I have to do is garb it. <em>????</em></font></font>
Wilford once said, “That which you persist in doing becomes easier, not that the nature of the thing has changed, but that your ability to do it has increased.” As for this class, it told us that <strike>owning</strike> <em>achieving </em>fluent oral English will be never easy for any learner, but the more you speak, the more you listen and the more you experience, the easer<strike> is</strike> English <em>will become</em> for you. I will treasure <strike>every</strike> <em>each </em>class<strike> I have to</strike> <em>where I can </em>practice my <strike>speaking</strike> <em>spoken </em>English and keep practicing to improve my English<strike> to another level</strike> even further.



Could anyone correct it for me? Thanks a lot! :)

 

All added words and restructured sentences are indicated using <em>italics.  </em>Your written English is actually quite good; the adjustments I made were simply to improve flow and make the paragraph sound like it was composed by a native.  Keep up the good work! ;)  NF