Historical Exhibition

As part of a student social survey project, you are organizing a group to visit a historical exhibition in a small town. Write a letter asking for information regarding such things as the contents of the exhibition, and the dates of its opening and closing, and if there are any discounts available.

Dear Madam.,
I am organizing a student's group to visit a historical exhibition on in your town. I would like can be able to visit her the next month and also make take a tour for  around the town. This visit is part of a student social survey project.
I would be grateful if you would send me information that I need to for the visit.

First of all, what are the contents of exhibition,? wWe would like know about the country's independence.
Secondly is the historical exhibition open daily? What is the time of closing?
Thirdly, I hope to bring twenty students,. Are there any discounts for students? are at the entry any discoount for students?

I am sure that we will enjoy the visit and know more about the activities in your town.

I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Your's fairthfuly. faithfully, 
Lorena

¡Hola Lorena! ¡Buen trabajo! Tu carta es muy organizado y claro. Solamente encuentro errores de ortografía y grammatica- como el punctuación y mayúscula.  ¡Que tenga un buen día! -Britney