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    Driving in other country.

    I will begin my vacation in just eight weeks and I am very excited about it. I will spend most of the time in the large city of Los Angeles so, I will need to rent a car. Although, I am an experienced driver, I am a bit scared about driving in a different country. At least I am not going to be in a country such as England or Ireland where they drive on the right side of the road. Sometimes I love driving and sometimes not because I hate traffic jams and people who drive slowly.


    I added, "on the right side of the road" because in this case it would make sense to include that information but the way you wrote it is also correct.  

    I deleted the comma after "At least" because it wasn't necessary and the comma after "sometimes not" because because you needed to connect the two I ideas you have in your last sentence.  


    Oh, and I also substituted the word "begin" with "start" because I feel it works better in this case.

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    March 23, 2016
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    Help me with my English skills.

    Hi,I'm Paulina and I'm looking for friends who can practice English with me and help me correct my mistakes :)! Please, write to me if anyone is able and willing to help!


    ;)

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    March 23, 2016
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