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- [Practice1]Please help to correct and modify it to more commonly by english native use. [thankyou]*******************************************Title********************************************************Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.****************************************************************************************************I disagree for the opinion of admin themselves on their ownUnclear. What does 'admin themselves' mean?I always think that the parent should let the child decide <s>themselves</s> on their own.'themselves' or 'on their own', but not bothNo matter whether the things they do are big or small, they have their own brain, and parents can not be together with their child <s>for </s>all the time for their whole life. That does not mean <s>to </s>the child should not take part in <s>the </s>pubic activities, but at least the parent should let the child make plans based on their own interests. Humans are social animals, this is an important aspect of every day of our lives, please don’t be worried that we will end up alone. I am a father and have a seven year old son in primary school. Some students in his class have less free time to play, parents are always talking to them and signing them up for many classes outside of school, such as English training, singing, painting and so on. After talking with my son about this situation, children will talk about their real inner feelings to their good friends. All their free time is occupied by the decisions of their parents. In other words, they lose themselves sometimes.This is all one sentence? Much too long. Different sentences for different ideas/points.Children should t learn how to make plans for themselves. This is very good for<s> the time</s> when they study in college or work. There is no way to get to this point in one day, it must be trained in the right way from their parents from the beginning.0 votedMay 6, 20201
- Q) Should we kill animals for food?A)Actually, I haven't thought about this seriously before.I learned from school that animals were essential for helping our ancestors to do farm work and for food , which made me think eating animals is their way of life. [I think this is what you mean, sentence was a bit unclear]I know <s>there are </s>some people are strongly against this.There have been some movements that try to take responsibility for animals and to protect animals from being killing for food around the world.Whenever I watched those movements happening on TV, I thought animals' right should be protected but since I started going on a ketogenic diet, I have felt guilty because fat from animals is one of the good resources for me.0 votedMay 6, 20200
- My favourite plays in Ecuador.1. Los Llanganates Park.Los Llanganates is a mountain park, where we can find many hectares of green grass, as well as animalslike El Condor (which is the symbol of my flag), rabbits, fish, foxes and others whose names I don't know.People's custom is to go there every year each 8th of February to pay tribute to the PACHA MAMA(Mother Earth), where there is dancing with traditional music and customs.The volcano experts say that Los Llanganates is a sleeping volcano, which has slept forthousands of years and can wake up anytime.Install an English keyboard on your phone or computer to automatically fix a lot of small spelling errors.0 votedMay 6, 20200
- Proof of ResidencyCertificationThis is to certify that Jack Smith has been living in No.5, Yuegui Road, Qinnan District, Qinzhou City, Guangxi Province, China for 5 years. Specific information is as follows:Name: Jack SmithSex: FemaleDate of Birth: 3rd October, 1995Citizen ID card number: xxxxSign by: Harry Potter, Shuidong neighborhood committee, Qinnan District, Qinzhou CitySign Dated: 5th May 2020Besides, I am wondering it is "Sign by: Harry Potter" or "Signed by: Harry Potter"?"Sign Dated" or "Sign Date", or other?Signed by, and usually just "Date", though you could also put "Date of signature" or "Date signed"0 votedMay 6, 20200
- a Real-Life Escape Game---B2 short letterHi Tony,Thanks for inviting me. I’ll gladly participate, even though I’ve never taken part in these types of games before. I kind of lacked the courage, and also the opportunity. Once we tried to arrange an event with my classmates, but couldn’t settle on a date, and then we somehow forgot about the whole thing.Out of the available games I’d choose Alien Attack. You must be thinking why a beginner like me wouldn’t choose the easiest one. The setting of the first game makes me uneasy a bit. Despite that I know it’s just a game, I still think that the scene, the props and the effects might freak me out a little. Just the thought of being on a sinking ship.On the other hand, alien invasion seems much more fun, and action-packed, besides, it can’t be much harder than the level 1 game, can it?So, I vote for Alien Attack, let me know about the further details.See you soon(Write an email of 120-150 words to Tony in which you-tell him whether you have any experience of real life escape games,-choose one game you would be ready to join Tony in,-give reasons for your choice.Begin your email like this: Hi Tony, )Good, though maybe I'd change "Despite that I know" to "Even though I know" or maybe "Despite the fact that I know". Just sounds a bit more natural.0 votedMay 6, 20201
- How can I do everything?Dear Diary, just like in the famous TV series. I don’t feel like getting up early in the morning, but I need to go to work. Welcome to a new day with a new reality. The new reality is quarantine, self-isolation, the mandatory wearing of masks, and passes [what are passes?]. It is good that there is enough time at work to study English. Otherwise, it would be completely sad. I fit into the marathon again, now sports.[Unclear. Maybe you mean, "I am training for the marathon again, and other sports"?] How am I going to keep up with everything ?! How am I going to make it and stay in the race?In addition to English, I also have drawing lessons. A quote comes to mind - "Believe you can, and you're halfway there" — Theodore Roosevelt. No one will support you except yourself, and you should accept it. Self-doubt prevents us from achieving our goals and plans.To start acting you need to believe in yourself. In my opinion, self-confidence education is the first step to the realization of your dreams and plans. That's why I can do it!0 votedMay 6, 20202
- Practicing writingSome people believe that it is good for students to have the same teacher for several years. Others think students benefit more from having new teachers each year. Which do you think is better?In my opinion, different teachers are better for students, because they have different ways of teaching the same subject.In this way, students will have the opportunity to choose a mentor who feels comfortable to guide their life.Obviously, for teachers, nothing loses as opposed to gain, because if students choose them, it means they admire him.Parents create a straight line with the community and a circle of trust between both teachers and students.I defend the open doors of the college, where everyone can gain knowledge or introduce new ideas.Free knowledge with access to speeches by brilliant minds about life, nature and technology. I really like this!Everyone needs a comfortable and safe place to come, that should be the goal of the entire collegeLet's make this a reality, invite your friends, teachers and students to have a picnic in college! Show me that it is possible to make this day a memorable holiday.There are a couple of sentences that I couldn't correct because the meaning is unclear to me:"for teachers, nothing loses as opposed to gain""Parents create a straight line with the community"0 votedMay 6, 20201
- _ Exercise: The 1-st Conditional _1) If I want to express a very probable situation in the future, I will use the 1-st conditional.2) She will take a vacation to another country, if her friend Sam lends her a small amount of money.3) John's pen-pal friend will show him around Seoul, if John writes to him beforehand and asks for such a favor.4) Right after you tell me that she is not important for you any more, I'll trust that you're ready to head over to our common goals.5) If your dog bites me, I'll call the police and you'll go to prison.6) If I don't stop talking with you right now, I'll be late for the bus.7) The people of Poland will choose a new president in May, if their government makes the decision to hold elections using the postal service.8) I think, my girlfriend won't take it well, if I don't call her in time.9) If you pick this flower, it will wilt in a couple of days.10) Probably some kind person will fix my sentences, if they open this page and waste several minutes of their life to help me.I'm trying to figure out how the conditional structures work in English, so I ask you to help me with that.Thank you!0 votedMay 6, 20201
- Dear DiaryIt's a balmy, sunny day, and I got up at the same time as I do every day. Today I did some shopping online, made personal purchases, summer suits, for the beginning of the season.I am so careful with my money, that it left me with heartache because I spent 200 RMB to purchase summer clothes. Yet they were necessities so I was willing to <s>take</s>.0 votedMay 6, 20200
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