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A little bit about myself, I have worked for an American company for one year after finishing my bachelor degree at the University of California, Berkeley. For the last 6 years, I have been living in California, where I considered as my second hometown. ^_^ I am a native speaker of Chinese (Mandarin), and my Cantonese is almost at a native level since I have lived in HK for many years. At this stage, being more proficient in Japanese is my top priority. Even though I just barely passed the JLPT N2 EXAM, my oral part is still lousy and underdeveloped. Looking forward to meeting Japanese native speakers who are interested in practicing Mandarin, Cantonese or English. Prefer to communicate through Skype, FaceTime or any apps you are using.
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    Are these sentence correct grammatically? Corrected

    你好你好吗?你要做什么。我正在写编辑一本杂志,这是关于游戏的,这有一百六(106 ? 160 ?)页,我有很都多杂志,都是关于游泳,打篮球和游戏,因为它们对我有很大帮助䢸帮我。我的杂志比其他杂志更好看因为它有很多图片,信息也和很有趣!在两个月内我就要发布我!的杂志,我很期待快乐!

    I have made several corrections to make your sentences sound more natural and fluent to native speakers. 
    Please pay attention to your punctuations since they play a crucial role of connecting different ideas.
    Overall, you have succeeded in conveying your idea and intention. Keep writing, and you will be progressing.   

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    July 23, 2017
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    Some of the sentences sound awkward to native Chinese speakers, overall, very fluent and precise translation.
    Here are some suggestions you may want to consider. 


    一家公司的简介,请帮我改正以一下!感谢你们!(只有四个句子)

    The Mobility House

    The leading European player in the electric mobility services market.
    欧洲电动车服务行业的领军企业。

    Location: Entrepreneurial team with a long-term experience in energy management, headquartered in Munich.
    所在:能源管理经验广大的事业家队,总部在慕尼黑。
    所在:总部位于德国慕尼黑,一支具有多年能源管理经验的专业团队。

    Products and services: Electric charging services, battery and energy management
    产品和服务:电动车充电服务,电池和能源管理。

    Customer base: Leading car manufacturers, utilities and large fleet owners.
    目标客户群:领先的汽车制造商,公共事业单位和大型车队的业主。
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    July 13, 2017
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