Sometimes
the winter becomes
tough and intolerable.
therefore People use their
chimneys to feel warm fireplaces to warm their houses.
and they also become more concern about making They make sure that all doors and windows are
completely closed to prevent
any kind of water leaking or drafts from entering.
through any possible holes in doors or windows. SOme people suffer from
some natural disasters such as hurricanes and typhoons ,which
always leave a lot of cause damage,
s and loses in souls loss of life and property.
and people possessions , and it's also a cause of They can also bring outbreaks of
some diseases.
The aftermath of such disasters is something huge and massive although of help that The losses can be great, though people might get help from their governments. It's
also hard to evacuate people from
their damaged houses
and taking them to save and to move them to safe areas where they can get shelters and food . In some poor countries, particularly in villages
in particular and before the rain season comes,villagers srart digging waterways to discharge water to uninhabitable areas
in order to reducing the risk of damage
danger and the consequences. Typhoons and hurricanes are
realy fascinating , astonishing and scary ,
but most importantly they always and they show how weak we are.
RULE #1 Short clear sentences 7-10 words RULE #2 remove all words that don't add information to your story.