谢谢邀请。 题目部分，如果修改为：关于……的调查，会更好。 你的语法基本没有问题，但是如果是论文的话，就显得不够书面，需要再调整一些表达方式。

请帮我检查作文instead of 查一查

jīngli(3)经理 那个经理又有钱又很帅。 校长（xiàozhǎng） 我打算有一天成为一名学校校长。 邻居lín jū 我小时候特别暗恋我街道穿过的邻居。街道穿过 -->对街 on the other side of the street. 同事（tóngshì） 我和我的发小就同事做英语播客。 是 ……同事。 嘴（zuǐ） 在你的嘴又巧克力。 又有 some sound different meaning 个字（gèzi） 当高个字很有帮助认识女生。 个子 figure 对…… 有帮助 be helpful for 裤子（kùzi） 请带我蓝色的裤子。 裙子（qúnzi） 男人没有穿裙子。 notice the difference between 没有 和不会，make sure that word express your real meaning. 帽子màozi 我夏天天天窗帽子因为太阳很亮。 穿窗 similar sound diferent meaning. and when you wear something , there are two words, 穿 and戴（dai4）, 戴 is fit those from head to neck, as well as fingers and wrists. the rests are used 穿 Could you please help me correct my exercise? You really did a good job! feel free to message me for more details!

pattern 怎么 ……也没 means no matter how , sth/sb is not. it's a speaking structure.

启发gived by others, 灵感generated by youeself.

Is this right? 我跟中国人试试常常说话。 (I try to speak often with Chinese people.) Thanks!

你好!我是英语老师，有八年教学经验。我在长春和厦门教雅思，但我的中文不好！我需要找一个位学伴帮我学汉语，我帮你提高雅思口语和写作水平，可以让你雅思提高到6+。 I'm an English teacher who was teaching IELTS in China for eight years but never studied Chinese properly. I got stuck outside China last Spring Festival but want to return. While I am waiting I want to improve my Chinese which at the moment is very basic. If you are IELTS level 6+ and want to get a higher score I can help you with reading and writing. 谢谢！

Good work! fast and clear! but I suggest you could speak slower, since tones in the sentences may change, such as when two third tones are put together. It's a bit hard to control, so you need to think about it before you speak. And you still have some difficulty when you pronounced s sh q, try to practice more words with these initials.[Audio]