Writing challenge. Day 1. List 5 things that make you really happy.
1.
The first thing that make
s me happy is food of course!
Because I'm in love
in with food. And I
'm not don't prefer only one
type of cuisine. I like Italian cuisine,
china C
hinese,
French and of course
Russian
of course.
2.
The second thing
it's is books. I'm reading a lot. And everyday I
something read read something. Not only
on in the Russian language. I have been read
ing some books in
English
, and soon I want
to start to read books in
German.
3.
The third thing
it's a is music. I'm musician and music is not just
one of a subject to learn for me
, it's my passion and love. I always listen to music.
4. Photography. I'm taking a
photocards from my film camera. It's not like
a digital camera.
Because I think
a film photos look
s more atmospheric.
5. Nature. My inspiration always will be in nature. I think everybody in this world feel
s this the power of nature. And this power give
s me inspiration.
Well it's only five things that make me happy. I will write about 10 things in the future I guess.
*I'm not sure what "photocards" is, it is not an English word. I could not correct that sentence because it doesn't make any sense to me.
Overall, not too bad. You had some minor grammar mistakes but I could easily understand what you were saying for each point.
Hope this helps, good luck with your English.