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    I just wrote a letter. Looking forward to your comments and corrections

    Writing Task: Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
    Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
    • thank them for the photos and for the holiday • explain why you didn’t write earlier • invite them to come and stay with you

    Hi Vivian and Leo,

    Last week I received the photos you mailed to me. They are so vivid I can’t stop recalling the times we had last month in Thailand. Thank you for sending them. I really cherish every second I spent with you during that time. You taught me how to ride a water motorcycle and helped me explore the underwater world which I had never experienced in the past. (you could say "before") It was awesome and memorable!

    I intended to reply to you last weekend but my young daughter got a heavy cough and I had to take care of her the whole weekend.  I then had a business trip to a customer's office in first half of this week and I have only just returned today. Sorry for replying so late as that was not my intension.

    I would like to  invite you to travel to my city for tourism. You should know that Hangzhou city has quite a number of well known natural features such as West Lake, which is a peaceful and beautiful lake with legend and stories connected with it. You will also find unforgettable types of Chinese food here as well.I promise you will love them. I can accompany you all the time during your trip so don't worry that you do not speak Chinese.

    Best Regards,
    Chuck
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    February 18, 2016
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    A jouney to Vietnam

    About week ago my brothers went back (you could say"returned") home from Vietnam. The flight took many hours and was expensive but they have been happy to see this part of world. Long distance journeys are most of the time more exciting for us than trips in Europe. The lifestyle in Vietnam is pretty different from lifestyle of Poland or Germany. They told me about their interesting experiences. Now they have to work but are already thinking about next holidays in Asia.
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    February 18, 2016
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    Should you be paranoid with your identity?

    Hello everybody.. This is a story from my "imagination", but reflect our world today.. I hope you read it, help me to fix my mistakes and give me your opinion:) Thanks!
    Do you think you should be paranoid about your identity? Keep reading to find the answer. Last vacation, I was enjoying my time In Italy. Then I received a call from an anonymous person, claiming that he was a director of a large company and that one of his customers had deposited 5 million (dollars ?) and then died. Since then, no one from his family had asked them about his money. He said that if I went to their company, they would give me all this money. At that moment, I didn't know what happened, but it seemed like my demons woke up and I felt greedy! I could not refuse, it was 5 million! However, my sister had doubts about his honesty. She said to me"He is a conman and will try to rip you off.  He does not know you! Get real Z and do not be a foolish victim." Do you think I listened to her? Absolutely not. I just listened to my wild imagination. New clothing, a diamond necklace. The next day, I went to see them and I received the 5 million, after they had asked me some fishy questions, like my bank details, my email and my address! When I went back home, I discovered that all this money was fake and my credit card was missing! I realized that I fallen victim to that fraudulent man and now I had 7000 worth of credit card bills in my name with my address! I was very angry and just wanted to cry, but anyway, he escaped and I had to pay for my foolishness. Finally, your identity is who you are and this small card may cost you a lot and bring you big problems, so be careful and protect it as you would protect yourself.
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    February 17, 2016
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    My day

    I heard noises in my sleep. It was the alarm clock! I was late for school. I jumped out of bed and quickly began preparing. I was out of the house at a quarter to nine. At this point, passing my house were girls from the ninth grade. I went to school with them. The first lesson I had was algebra. I complimented the teacher who was made for the  job. I was pleased because I love mathematics. When classes were over, I came home. As always, I ate and cleaned  up after myself. I did my homework and then went to a party. I really had a good time there and after returning home I went straight to bed.


    Я услышала какие-то звуки в сквозь сон. Это был будильник! Я уже опаздывала в школу выскочила с кровати и быстро начала готовится. Вышла из дома без четверти девятого. В этот момент мимо моего дома проходили девочки с девятого класса. Я пошла в школу вместе с ними. Первый урок у меня была алгебра. Меня похвалила учительница за верно сделанные задания. Мне было приятно потому что я очень люблю математику. Когда закончились уроки я пришла домой. Как всегда покушала и убралась за собой. Сделала уроки и пошла на вечеринку. Там я очень хорошо провела время и вернувшись домой я сразу легла спать.

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    February 17, 2016
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