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Hello, I'm Isabelle. I live in Canada, but I've travelled a lot on my own and have gained an interest in learning a lot of languages, but specifically, I'd like to get better in Korean. I'm really looking for new friends who can help me with that, and I can also help you learn English, French, or Tagalog!
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    Is this email polite and correct?

    Hi Rob,

    I really just had a pair of few opportunities to check the device (I'm not sure what you mean here, but do you mean your phone device? In that case, you can say: I only had a few opportunities to check my phone and have been unable to see your email) because now I'm assigned to another project. But However, let me introduce you with to Dr. M.R, who is the principal researcher and responsible for the TEM equipment. From now on, he is going to continue with the communications with the technical support staff of Geonics, expecting it can be successful in resolved resolving or the resolution of the functioning of the TEM equipment.

    Best regards


    This email is polite, and I've corrected some of your mistakes to make it sound better to whoever you're sending this to. I'm not sure what the context of the email is, so I can't change everything, but I hope this will help! 



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    The third is Cupping. What a weird name in English. Briefly speaking, we light a fire - (you can use a piece of paper, but in China, we will use some herb which I have forgotten...) - in a cup, then upsidedown flip the cup, and press it on one's back heavily. It is obvirously obviously so that the fire will go out when oxygen beside these cups is used up. The most interesting part is that the hot air in the cups will keep stimulating your back, and your back is absorbed into those cups which even makes you a little hurt (or: which will even hurt you a little). After all these cups cool down we bring them off your dotted back and then have a good sleep. 
    All the three methods are useful for colds and some other diseases caused by cold weather.


    This was a really good entry, but there were mistakes here and there. The reason for your mistakes is mainly because of the tense you use! If you start talking in past tense, stay in past tense, or if you talk in future, stay in future. There were a few times when you used the adjective instead of the noun, like dry instead of dryness or uncomfortable instead of discomfort. This entry was really long, and your efforts were really good! Keep practicing because your English is really good already! 

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    This is my first wrighting in writing/time writing/entry on italki and hope to carry on in the next few months. 

    I felt a little ache and dryness in my throat when I wake woke up this morning. This feeling was so familiar, and I knew I may catch caught a cold again, which makes made me think back the back to my childhood when I hated the bad taste of medicine pills and my family have had to think about some other methods to alleviate my uncomfortable discomfort.
    The first method is the most common used all over the world: drink hot water as frequency frequently as possible! What's more, the water mu my parents prepared for me is was so hot that I feel  felt a little hurt over on my tongue, but it was very useful for my sore throat.
    The second method is "Gua Sha." I am not clear how to speak it in English (or: I don't know how to say it in English.) It takes a piece of smooth ox horn or coin as a tool. Each time before you use this tool to scarp scrape on one's back, you should put on a little white over the surface of the tool. Remember to scarp scrape heavily so that the back is totally (or use: completely) hot and red. Nowadays, Gua Sha is not only used to cure colds, but also in some other physical therapy.

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    Look on the Bright Side of Rules

    Parents set a lot of rules for children. For example, at home, we can't go out on school nights. And , and we have to help do some housework. Sometimes, we are tired of the rules and feel unhappy. But, but if we put ourselves into our parents' shoes and look on the bright side, we may feel better about the rules. You see, we can go out and have fun on weekends. Doing housework is not really a waste of time. It teaches us some life skills such as cooking and cleaning. So, rules help us build good habits, and we should follow them. (or: So, rules help us build good habits that we should follow.)


    This is a really great entry! There are just a few mistakes that can also be accepted! Sentences in English don't start with words like "and" or "but" because these words connect and link sentences to each other. 

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