Women's work

In contrast of to a lot of people's thinking, women are able to do everything as that men can do that, but also women are also eligible to do missions that men cannot do them. Unfortunately a lot of people don't appreciate women's work as what they do with men's work. In spite of the fact that women find themselves are being compelled to sacrifice too much for their children and their spouses. Although despite all of that, it's very popular to find some people who say " A women's place is in the home ".

The weekend

I try to spend my time in a useful way every weekend. I try to wake up at 6:00am and I check my Skype, email and italki. and I spend about 30 minutes for do on them after that and afterwards I start my study with this book " 504 absolutely essential words". I really love it, there are a lot of new words in this book. I watch a movie in the afternoon or go out with my sister. Some people like to sleep a lot on holiday days, but I prefer to get up very soon early and learn a new things. I'm going to study hard this weekend, because I couldn't study hard for a long time and it's not good, and so I should make up for it.

(Most of my corrections are only minor details. Otherwise this was very well written and I understood it perfectly.)

Connectors and other words

I'm practising writing using connectors and other key words. Could you please help me with these sentences?

-At first sight, it looked like an awkward proposition but after hearing him I could understand their real intentions
-After all the argument arguing or arguments, we finally decided to stay at home
-Could you get me some milk from the supermarket? Also cheese and chocolate, please
-You should take the train, or you can go by bus as well
-In general I agreed, although not in all the points
-You keep working on that. In the meantime, I'm going to try to fix the other issue
-We are going to eat out tonight, despite the rain
-She's got to sign these papers today. Otherwise she's got to come back tomorrow

Thanks in advance!

My lazy day!

I lived a lazy life today.
I worked all the morning,
and then after the lunch time, I slept for three hours.
I am not sure that if I could have a sweet dream tonight or not,
because I usually can't sleep owing to my afternoon nap!

I love italki

Because of my desire to learn English, I was looking for a good way to improve it recently. Then I found "italki" . I registered the account yesterday. After a while I met my first friend on italki. His name is Lucas. A nice boy from Brazil. We chat each other very happy We got along very well. I even forgot to sleep!
I love this place. It will let us meet here ,wherever you are , whoever you are. You will always be my sincere friend.
If you are looking for new friends, please contact me. I am here. :)

You would say "I let myself down".

Deadpool

Yesterday my girlfriend, my brother and I went to the cinema. We watched Deadpool.
The film had many jokes, including ones about the last time Deadpool appeared in Wolverine: Origins. Besides that the violence is extreme, Deadpool talks a lot and the soundtrack is great!
To be honest I liked a lot, because the character it was like in HQ. (I don't understand what this means...)
Now I can't wait for the next film! If the first film is a success, everybody will be very excited for the second.