Family Life
I’m going to write about my family. I have a big family and it makes me feel so lucky. I have two brother
s, one is the
eldest (Carlos) and other
is the youngest (Ricardo). I’m the middle child. Two boys and only a girl… You can imagine!
Our childhood was an adventure. We passed great times together but, we sometimes wanted
killing to kill each other. In
the childhood’s my childhood home, we shared the same bedroom for a long time. The house wasn’t
a big
house and my two brothers and I slept in the same room. My friend Tara always said: “Your home seems
like New Year’s Eve every day!”
Nowadays, the situation is so different. Carlos moved to Madrid a few months ago and Ricardo and I
lived live with our parents
in on the island. We
cannot see
us him like we want, but we stay in contact by WhatsApp every day.
I
don’t wouldn't change
nothing anything in my childhood. It was amazing
thankful thanks to my brothers. They taught me a lot and they are
always there when I
always need
them. I think this is the most important thing.
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Comments: In some instances, your English was understandable but I edited for a more natural flow, such as the part about your house not being big and your brothers being there for you. Overall this was very good writing!
