The winter holiday is coming. Everyone is so excited because The Spring Festival is coming soon. It is much colder than before. My mother called me yesterday and told me that it snowed. I can image what my hometown is like <em>at</em> this time. It must be beautiful. <em>At</em> this moment I miss my parents, niece, and brother. <em>(You could just say "my" before the first person you are talking about. You don't really have to say it after each person)</em> At last, I want to say happy New Year to everyone and I want a friend who is a native English speaker to help me with my written and speaking English. If you have a we-chat number, please tell me. I think we can help each other.
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January 22, 2016
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My neighbor <em>gave</em> me a farewell party glad to have this going away party. My <em>neighbors are</em> a nice couple. They gave us this party to celebrate <em>us leaving.</em> We had eating, chatting and took pictures for kids. I feel <em>like</em> I should invite them to China for a tour when I go back to China.
Another note: "celebrate us leaving" sounds like they were happy you are leaving. Instead you might say, "They gave us this party because we were leaving/moving".
Offering them a tour in China sounds like a great idea!
